
8/30/2019 c3
12Frodo's sister
Very good story so far. I'm glad that Aria was finally able to break through Elana's garden. Please continue.

Very good story so far. I'm glad that Aria was finally able to break through Elana's garden. Please continue.
7/2/2010 c3
4Julia Lucrezia Hanazono
Those stupid girls! Especially that Lilly girl! How dare they treat Elena that way! They're so cruel! I'm glad Aria saved Elena again! She's so brave! I like this story! Please update it soon!

Those stupid girls! Especially that Lilly girl! How dare they treat Elena that way! They're so cruel! I'm glad Aria saved Elena again! She's so brave! I like this story! Please update it soon!
7/2/2010 c2 Julia Lucrezia Hanazono
This seems like a good story so far! Aria seems like a pretty strong and good female character. That was brave of her to save Elena like that, despite being rejected by her. Great work!
This seems like a good story so far! Aria seems like a pretty strong and good female character. That was brave of her to save Elena like that, despite being rejected by her. Great work!
7/1/2009 c2
1eurazngal
After I read the summary I knew I couldn't turn away. You came up with a really interesting idea! I especially liked how you gave a lot of description, but wrote it in a way that wasn't awkward or over the top.

After I read the summary I knew I couldn't turn away. You came up with a really interesting idea! I especially liked how you gave a lot of description, but wrote it in a way that wasn't awkward or over the top.
7/1/2009 c2 sakurily
that is good!
that is good!
5/5/2009 c1
1Terryll Preston
This prologue is absolutely irresistible! It has such a wonderful use of metaphors. Just this paragraph has hooked me into whatever you have planned on the horizon. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Good luck and don't keep me waiting!
See you next review!
Terryll Preston

This prologue is absolutely irresistible! It has such a wonderful use of metaphors. Just this paragraph has hooked me into whatever you have planned on the horizon. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Good luck and don't keep me waiting!
See you next review!
Terryll Preston