for Bob5/9/2009 c1 
23witheredxwaste
it's been long since you've posted anything, I'm glad you've posted this.
I've really enjoyed reading this. I am no writer, so I could not possibly give anybody literary advice at this time, but just know that you made my day.
-h.l.b.
23witheredxwasteit's been long since you've posted anything, I'm glad you've posted this.
I've really enjoyed reading this. I am no writer, so I could not possibly give anybody literary advice at this time, but just know that you made my day.
-h.l.b.
5/7/2009 c1 2Lullaby Street
Hello there.
Hm...interesting idea, which I liked.
I would review more but the chapter was a bit short. Not bad, I am ust pointing that out.
Post soon.
Have a lovely week.
~Manola3
2Lullaby StreetHello there.
Hm...interesting idea, which I liked.
I would review more but the chapter was a bit short. Not bad, I am ust pointing that out.
Post soon.
Have a lovely week.
~Manola3
5/7/2009 c1 2mythee
This is another beautiful piece. I read A Quiet Kiss (which is great but sorry I didn't leave a review before), I like your style of writing. It's so realistic and flowy and even humorous.
"Bob. What a fucking stupid name for the boy I’m in love with." (lol I can completely relate.) Simple name but it worked in this story.
The last bolded section was disapointing (only because they didn't end up together but I don't like happy endings in my own stories).
Yea, blame it on Disney.
2mytheeThis is another beautiful piece. I read A Quiet Kiss (which is great but sorry I didn't leave a review before), I like your style of writing. It's so realistic and flowy and even humorous.
"Bob. What a fucking stupid name for the boy I’m in love with." (lol I can completely relate.) Simple name but it worked in this story.
The last bolded section was disapointing (only because they didn't end up together but I don't like happy endings in my own stories).
Yea, blame it on Disney.