
3/1/2015 c19 ECHmusic
Great plot the only really big problem u had was adding unsuccessful information(like information that wasn't important in that part of the story)other than that and a few mistakes in grammer and spelling it was a good story :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
Great plot the only really big problem u had was adding unsuccessful information(like information that wasn't important in that part of the story)other than that and a few mistakes in grammer and spelling it was a good story :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
5/5/2013 c19
7RayRayofCali
Maybe it's just me but the website won't let me in or the page doesn't exist. Help?

Maybe it's just me but the website won't let me in or the page doesn't exist. Help?
8/13/2012 c3
23rd Bookworm
God your story is awesome, Couple of and spelling mistakes but otherwise great

God your story is awesome, Couple of and spelling mistakes but otherwise great
10/27/2011 c20 Rosedreamer101
wtf...i was trying to look for this story just to you know- re-read it :D when i found it wasn't in my favorite stories list...i was devastating, desperately brousing the net for it ! of course i had forgotten the name of the story...so my cause was hopeless. until i ran across one of your other story :D i wanted to read it, so i went onto your profile, for i don't know why. and found INDIAN SUMMER ! IT'S FATE I TELL YOU- FATE !
wtf...i was trying to look for this story just to you know- re-read it :D when i found it wasn't in my favorite stories list...i was devastating, desperately brousing the net for it ! of course i had forgotten the name of the story...so my cause was hopeless. until i ran across one of your other story :D i wanted to read it, so i went onto your profile, for i don't know why. and found INDIAN SUMMER ! IT'S FATE I TELL YOU- FATE !
8/27/2011 c1
1GittaStar
It is a good plot, but I think you could work on making your sentnce, and paragraphs longer

It is a good plot, but I think you could work on making your sentnce, and paragraphs longer
7/29/2011 c19 Rosedreamer101
URGGG, this story was so perfect ! AHH I love it. . they had the undenialable acttraction which I LOVEEEE, she was so witty and clever, he was so cocky and (i find that very hot). their sexual chemistry WAS HOOTT WHICH I LOVEDDDD. And there wasnt too much drama, and wasnt too little drama :D a+
URGGG, this story was so perfect ! AHH I love it. . they had the undenialable acttraction which I LOVEEEE, she was so witty and clever, he was so cocky and (i find that very hot). their sexual chemistry WAS HOOTT WHICH I LOVEDDDD. And there wasnt too much drama, and wasnt too little drama :D a+
1/28/2011 c1
14xxLovelessly Yoursxx
this story is really more entertaining than i thought it would be. buen trabajo :)

this story is really more entertaining than i thought it would be. buen trabajo :)
10/5/2010 c19 castiel89
So I just read the entire thing while at work (I should so be fired already). It was cute. Hated the amber chick from the moment we met her... Blake was totally cheating on her in Cali and has no grounds to call her a whore... Gr. Stupid boys.
Nice job :)
So I just read the entire thing while at work (I should so be fired already). It was cute. Hated the amber chick from the moment we met her... Blake was totally cheating on her in Cali and has no grounds to call her a whore... Gr. Stupid boys.
Nice job :)
8/1/2010 c20 awwwww
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7/20/2010 c19 Aradia Cloud
Ah. boy. I feel as if this ending was kina rushed. It was sweet, but kina rushed. DEMO; it was a good story and i enjoyed it.
Kudos
$*Aradia Cloud*$
Ah. boy. I feel as if this ending was kina rushed. It was sweet, but kina rushed. DEMO; it was a good story and i enjoyed it.
Kudos
$*Aradia Cloud*$
7/20/2010 c9 Aradia Cloud
Isabella needs to make her fucking mind. Either she's with Blake or with Chase.
Isabella needs to make her fucking mind. Either she's with Blake or with Chase.