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5/9/2009 c1 50GirlWithTheBrokenSmile
Nicely done:) I like the way you described "trying to be a gentleman". The only thing I would change is the way it's set up. It would be easier to read if it was organized into stanzas.

"A gentleman is who I am

And what I strive to be

All I ask is that you never

Take that name from me"

Those were my favorite lines:)

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