
5/11/2009 c1
81BedHead-RedHead
that was amazingly awsum! :) so well written - i can't even tell you! it flowed so well - all the lines wove together with one another perfectly! i loved it, there was so much feeling and heartbreak that is so relatable to me. well done!

that was amazingly awsum! :) so well written - i can't even tell you! it flowed so well - all the lines wove together with one another perfectly! i loved it, there was so much feeling and heartbreak that is so relatable to me. well done!
5/8/2009 c1
5blackberrycobbler
bueno amiga, es muy bonita. you seem to know about what I'd like to say sometimes.

bueno amiga, es muy bonita. you seem to know about what I'd like to say sometimes.
5/8/2009 c1
151ForeverBehindTheImpression
Beautiful.
"And know
That your empty hand
Could have been holding mine"
I love the repitition you had with that. Great piece, although I thought the saying went, "Getting the wrong end of the stick," or "pulling the short straw." But yeah, that could just be me. Hehe

Beautiful.
"And know
That your empty hand
Could have been holding mine"
I love the repitition you had with that. Great piece, although I thought the saying went, "Getting the wrong end of the stick," or "pulling the short straw." But yeah, that could just be me. Hehe