for Brother, Dear5/30/2011 c14 xXSoundlessMusicXx
Loved it! I've seen some mistakes with spelling and a few punctuation ones, but overall it was awesome! Well, I hope you're feeling better and am glad you got a computer. Man, so many bad things happened for you...Well, I wish you a happy future, now.
- xXSoundlessMusicXx
Loved it! I've seen some mistakes with spelling and a few punctuation ones, but overall it was awesome! Well, I hope you're feeling better and am glad you got a computer. Man, so many bad things happened for you...Well, I wish you a happy future, now.
- xXSoundlessMusicXx
4/26/2011 c14 
17Ashley4287
are you sick of hearing me say that your stories are awesome. if so, well too bad, i'm going to have to say it again : THIS WAS AWESOME :D haha enjoyed it thoroughly
17Ashley4287are you sick of hearing me say that your stories are awesome. if so, well too bad, i'm going to have to say it again : THIS WAS AWESOME :D haha enjoyed it thoroughly
4/17/2011 c14 witeaya
this is the second time i read the story and still love it to bits like the first time.
great plot, interesting characters. but i think there are still loose ends needed to be tied. like what todd and darien argued.
are u stilt going to write the sequel?
this is the second time i read the story and still love it to bits like the first time.
great plot, interesting characters. but i think there are still loose ends needed to be tied. like what todd and darien argued.
are u stilt going to write the sequel?
4/13/2011 c14 1it'sallgoodfun
You write the best stories! Please update Spirits. I love that one, too. :) Wish you all the best.
1it'sallgoodfunYou write the best stories! Please update Spirits. I love that one, too. :) Wish you all the best.
1/4/2011 c1 shortieecakee
just a quick question. The page breakers you use in your stories have the letters 'LKJHGFDSDFGHJKLKJHGFDS' Does this have a significant meaning or are they just random?
just a quick question. The page breakers you use in your stories have the letters 'LKJHGFDSDFGHJKLKJHGFDS' Does this have a significant meaning or are they just random?
12/13/2010 c14 3AJS
Very cute. :] Darien became ridiculously sweet after all the shit went down, haha. That's cute how he decided that he wanted to make Breklyn his girlfriend before even meeting her.
One thing I would say though is if you could make that transition of their relationship a little better. I get that Breklyn turned to him because he was the only one who didn't lie to her, and probably Darien has always been puddy in her hands if he ever saw her really sad, but it also brings to question... I mean Breklyn must have broken down or something before, right? It couldn't have been the first time Darien had seen her like this. But then again, maybe she had just never opened herself up to him before either.
I guess the other thing I would say about this story is that the whole transition in their parents' personalities wasn't very smooth either. I mean I don't think that Amy is a bitch, despite all the stuff she said and did at the end. I don't know why but that just seemed like it wasn't in her character at all. And Jasmine isn't all good either. I mean she is nice, granted, but I think part of that is because she sees Breklyn now as someone other than just the child of a woman who stole her husband. She probably also sees it as revenge because she's stealing something from that woman now. Also I don't believe that Dorien's dad is all bad either. I don't know. I feel like that was too drastic and unbelievable. I mean everyone has their story, don't they? It also is understandable that Amy and Steven would be less accepting of Dorien & Breklyn than Jasmine and Daniel would be. After all, they're the ones who have a daughter who's connected to both their kids. The situation is a little more real to them than say to Daniel and Jasmine.
Either way though, Dorien & Breklyn are super cute together. Why did he date or do whatever with that other girl anyway? And why did he close up about it when Breklyn mentioned it? Just cuz he reminded him of Todd or something? Anyway yeah. Super cute. :] I hope you keep on writing!
- Alyssa
3AJSVery cute. :] Darien became ridiculously sweet after all the shit went down, haha. That's cute how he decided that he wanted to make Breklyn his girlfriend before even meeting her.
One thing I would say though is if you could make that transition of their relationship a little better. I get that Breklyn turned to him because he was the only one who didn't lie to her, and probably Darien has always been puddy in her hands if he ever saw her really sad, but it also brings to question... I mean Breklyn must have broken down or something before, right? It couldn't have been the first time Darien had seen her like this. But then again, maybe she had just never opened herself up to him before either.
I guess the other thing I would say about this story is that the whole transition in their parents' personalities wasn't very smooth either. I mean I don't think that Amy is a bitch, despite all the stuff she said and did at the end. I don't know why but that just seemed like it wasn't in her character at all. And Jasmine isn't all good either. I mean she is nice, granted, but I think part of that is because she sees Breklyn now as someone other than just the child of a woman who stole her husband. She probably also sees it as revenge because she's stealing something from that woman now. Also I don't believe that Dorien's dad is all bad either. I don't know. I feel like that was too drastic and unbelievable. I mean everyone has their story, don't they? It also is understandable that Amy and Steven would be less accepting of Dorien & Breklyn than Jasmine and Daniel would be. After all, they're the ones who have a daughter who's connected to both their kids. The situation is a little more real to them than say to Daniel and Jasmine.
Either way though, Dorien & Breklyn are super cute together. Why did he date or do whatever with that other girl anyway? And why did he close up about it when Breklyn mentioned it? Just cuz he reminded him of Todd or something? Anyway yeah. Super cute. :] I hope you keep on writing!
- Alyssa
10/2/2010 c7 browneyedbrunette AKA
rina.katie@gmail
ok, i officially love you. You are the greatest thing in the entire world, and i would die without you. that is all.
rina.katie@gmail
ok, i officially love you. You are the greatest thing in the entire world, and i would die without you. that is all.
9/20/2010 c14 Da-zGreen
You are a great freaking writer. I can't believe I finished this in one hour. I love your stories. They all have good story line. Hope you come up with more stories because I will be here to review and read! Thanks for the fun!
You are a great freaking writer. I can't believe I finished this in one hour. I love your stories. They all have good story line. Hope you come up with more stories because I will be here to review and read! Thanks for the fun!
8/25/2010 c5 6Veneya
Sorry, I only had time to read your fic until this chapter so I decided to review up to here. I'll make sure to finish it off when I get the tiem. It is absolutely awesome so far.
6VeneyaSorry, I only had time to read your fic until this chapter so I decided to review up to here. I'll make sure to finish it off when I get the tiem. It is absolutely awesome so far.
8/5/2010 c14 11BlackWolfCub
aw, huge grin. What a bitch of a mother poor emily having to live with them after having that awful accident. Anyway love the story apart from a few grammatical errors and a few sentances that didn't quite work, but I wouldn't be able to do any better nor am I the grammer police! So I loved it and putting it in my Farvourites and off to see your other stories. Picked this up from the SKOW websites and I am very glad I did.
Also there is something really wierd with your review replies about half way through. Hope your eyesight is better or at least managable!
11BlackWolfCubaw, huge grin. What a bitch of a mother poor emily having to live with them after having that awful accident. Anyway love the story apart from a few grammatical errors and a few sentances that didn't quite work, but I wouldn't be able to do any better nor am I the grammer police! So I loved it and putting it in my Farvourites and off to see your other stories. Picked this up from the SKOW websites and I am very glad I did.
Also there is something really wierd with your review replies about half way through. Hope your eyesight is better or at least managable!
8/3/2010 c14 rainmewithkisses
I love your story! Though it was short, I liked how Darien was so sweet and all! I hope you consider writing love triangle stories though! i love those kind of stories! Anyways, you did good :)
I love your story! Though it was short, I liked how Darien was so sweet and all! I hope you consider writing love triangle stories though! i love those kind of stories! Anyways, you did good :)
7/20/2010 c14 TheGoddessPixie
I only joined this site about 6 weeks or so ago and I think you should know I only add stories to my favorites list that I really like and want to read over and over again. THIS story will be added to my favorites list.
~Pix~
I only joined this site about 6 weeks or so ago and I think you should know I only add stories to my favorites list that I really like and want to read over and over again. THIS story will be added to my favorites list.
~Pix~
7/5/2010 c14 Hali2010
Aw! That was such a cute story! Good job, i love how just as it seemed like it was going to get boring and predictable you threw another curve ball at us. Sorry to hear(read?) about your eyes, hope everything worked(s) out. Great story and again, good job!
Aw! That was such a cute story! Good job, i love how just as it seemed like it was going to get boring and predictable you threw another curve ball at us. Sorry to hear(read?) about your eyes, hope everything worked(s) out. Great story and again, good job!