for Brother, Dear1/19/2010 c14 ilovepunks
YEY! ohmyy, i am a veryy happy girl. :')
you updated on a LOT of your stories!- i find that amazing cosidering your eye issue :)
aw, brecklyn & darien are just the sweetest!
thanks for updating! well done and keep it up!
ps, hope you are getting better. :)
-ilovepunks x
YEY! ohmyy, i am a veryy happy girl. :')
you updated on a LOT of your stories!- i find that amazing cosidering your eye issue :)
aw, brecklyn & darien are just the sweetest!
thanks for updating! well done and keep it up!
ps, hope you are getting better. :)
-ilovepunks x
1/19/2010 c14 
6little-kayleigh
it was a cute story. going to look if you started writing the sequel yet. thanks for writing. *~*kay
6little-kayleighit was a cute story. going to look if you started writing the sequel yet. thanks for writing. *~*kay
1/18/2010 c14 24Soen22
Ah yes! You are so good at wrapping things up :) and thankyouthankyouthankyou emily for saying "She's just-she's a bitch." because it is very true. Is her mom the psycho in this story?
24Soen22Ah yes! You are so good at wrapping things up :) and thankyouthankyouthankyou emily for saying "She's just-she's a bitch." because it is very true. Is her mom the psycho in this story?
1/18/2010 c1 1tweetypie16
I just have to say, I found this story while scrolling for something to read. And it was one of the most incredible, wonderful stories I have ever ever read. I cried! I NEVER CRY! And my body tingled the first time they kissed. I just really got into the story.
A few things I noticed:
in Chapter 10? Darien says "My god, I had to wait eleven years for you." a few sentences later, Breklyn thinks "He's right, he did have to wait eight years." So just a little difference, no biggie.
And in the epilogue, "Darien haven't slept together." You just forgot the 'and i'. Not big things, im being really annoying by pointing them out.
I read about your eyesight, and I have included you in my prayers. I hope it gets better! :) Keep writing, your stories are incredible! Thank you so much for inspiring me to keep writing (even though basically none of my good stories are up on here) and for letting me enjoy a story so much! I don't remember the last time I read something and enjoyed it this much.
1tweetypie16I just have to say, I found this story while scrolling for something to read. And it was one of the most incredible, wonderful stories I have ever ever read. I cried! I NEVER CRY! And my body tingled the first time they kissed. I just really got into the story.
A few things I noticed:
in Chapter 10? Darien says "My god, I had to wait eleven years for you." a few sentences later, Breklyn thinks "He's right, he did have to wait eight years." So just a little difference, no biggie.
And in the epilogue, "Darien haven't slept together." You just forgot the 'and i'. Not big things, im being really annoying by pointing them out.
I read about your eyesight, and I have included you in my prayers. I hope it gets better! :) Keep writing, your stories are incredible! Thank you so much for inspiring me to keep writing (even though basically none of my good stories are up on here) and for letting me enjoy a story so much! I don't remember the last time I read something and enjoyed it this much.
1/18/2010 c14 punkrock13
This was really good. I hope you do a one-shot about them getting married,I'd love that. Also,I think on this part you meant Darien and I, "For your information, Darien haven't slept together.".
P.S.- I thought I'd wish you a early Happy 21st Birthday!
This was really good. I hope you do a one-shot about them getting married,I'd love that. Also,I think on this part you meant Darien and I, "For your information, Darien haven't slept together.".
P.S.- I thought I'd wish you a early Happy 21st Birthday!
1/17/2010 c14 Lexy7432
Aw Im sucker 4 happy endings :D I'm so glad they're together and happy. I can't wait 4 the sequel :D
Aw Im sucker 4 happy endings :D I'm so glad they're together and happy. I can't wait 4 the sequel :D
1/17/2010 c14 Hazelnut Romance
can't wait to see emily's sequel up. nice ending, though i guess amy won't change.
can't wait to see emily's sequel up. nice ending, though i guess amy won't change.
1/17/2010 c8 Jaden Ink
AWE . ^_^ i love Emily too! zmog... this story makes me swell with fluffie insideds...
AWE . ^_^ i love Emily too! zmog... this story makes me swell with fluffie insideds...
1/17/2010 c7 Jaden Ink
. AWE! okasy so i'm obsessed. and i think Darrien already know's that he likes Breklyn. that's why he secretly hates todd and hates it when she cries... but yet he can't help fighting and acting like he hates her cause he' really tortured that she is essentially his stepsister... I really like jasmine... and daniel... the other two can jump off a bridge...
. AWE! okasy so i'm obsessed. and i think Darrien already know's that he likes Breklyn. that's why he secretly hates todd and hates it when she cries... but yet he can't help fighting and acting like he hates her cause he' really tortured that she is essentially his stepsister... I really like jasmine... and daniel... the other two can jump off a bridge...
1/16/2010 c14 3DarkGoddess3
I think they are perfect for each other. Its a great story. Her Mother is a real B*! I kinda feel a little sorry for Todd.
I think they are perfect for each other. Its a great story. Her Mother is a real B*! I kinda feel a little sorry for Todd.
1/16/2010 c14 KMx0x
Aww, they're so cute. (:
I think I've said the same thing every chapter. LOL.
Ah, I love this story. ): I can't believe it's over.
Aww, they're so cute. (:
I think I've said the same thing every chapter. LOL.
Ah, I love this story. ): I can't believe it's over.