for Tomorrow I Die8/29/2010 c1 
16dail-of-the-air
Excellent meter in this one, though the rhyme pattern is somewhat lost after the first two lines. Good emotional expression; angst comes out much better in poetry than in prose. This is one of the best suicide poems that I've ever read.
16dail-of-the-airExcellent meter in this one, though the rhyme pattern is somewhat lost after the first two lines. Good emotional expression; angst comes out much better in poetry than in prose. This is one of the best suicide poems that I've ever read.
5/9/2009 c1 353Louis Denair
Very inspired. If it's only God that can stop you, I think you will be fantastically successful.
353Louis DenairVery inspired. If it's only God that can stop you, I think you will be fantastically successful.
5/9/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
this is powerful
and i like that it's in the form of prose almost.
nice job, keep writing!
145young and the recklessthis is powerful
and i like that it's in the form of prose almost.
nice job, keep writing!