for Too Much?6/15/2009 c1 
11Whispers of the Lost
The emotions here are so well conveyed and you make them so easy to identify with. I loved the organization, it really emphasized the thoughts well.
"I wish you would admit
To my pain"
Loved that! Absolutely beautiful.
-Sasha
11Whispers of the LostThe emotions here are so well conveyed and you make them so easy to identify with. I loved the organization, it really emphasized the thoughts well.
"I wish you would admit
To my pain"
Loved that! Absolutely beautiful.
-Sasha
6/3/2009 c1 173Broken Winged Bird
This is exactly what I need from someone, a simple apology... even if it doesn't mean anything like I know it won't. All I need is to hear that.
Anyway, wonderfully written! I relate to this so much you just have no idea. Definitely a fav :)
173Broken Winged BirdThis is exactly what I need from someone, a simple apology... even if it doesn't mean anything like I know it won't. All I need is to hear that.
Anyway, wonderfully written! I relate to this so much you just have no idea. Definitely a fav :)
5/20/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
Well its good that you got it in the end :)
"Why can’t you just acknowledge
That I’ve been hurt
That you let it happen
And that you didn’t even ignore it
You simply
Stood back
And let it happen"
I really loved those lines. I was just going to paste the last three lines of the above, but then I realised that I liked even more :)
4HighOnBrokenWingsWell its good that you got it in the end :)
"Why can’t you just acknowledge
That I’ve been hurt
That you let it happen
And that you didn’t even ignore it
You simply
Stood back
And let it happen"
I really loved those lines. I was just going to paste the last three lines of the above, but then I realised that I liked even more :)
5/14/2009 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
love the repitition technique used here and the italicizing- it puts the oomph into the powerful words that makes the reader more emotional. very pleased 2 hear you got your apology! :) nice job
81BedHead-RedHeadlove the repitition technique used here and the italicizing- it puts the oomph into the powerful words that makes the reader more emotional. very pleased 2 hear you got your apology! :) nice job
5/10/2009 c1 5blackberrycobbler
gotta say, personal experience always makes the best writings. touches that little nerve that makes people go "wow".
5blackberrycobblergotta say, personal experience always makes the best writings. touches that little nerve that makes people go "wow".
5/10/2009 c1 16maple the wacky tree
aw. how sad. but beautifully done. and good for you for finally getting that apology.
16maple the wacky treeaw. how sad. but beautifully done. and good for you for finally getting that apology.