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6/15/2009 c1 11Whispers of the Lost
The emotions here are so well conveyed and you make them so easy to identify with. I loved the organization, it really emphasized the thoughts well.

"I wish you would admit

To my pain"

Loved that! Absolutely beautiful.

6/3/2009 c1 173Broken Winged Bird
This is exactly what I need from someone, a simple apology... even if it doesn't mean anything like I know it won't. All I need is to hear that.

Anyway, wonderfully written! I relate to this so much you just have no idea. Definitely a fav :)
5/20/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
Well its good that you got it in the end :)

"Why can’t you just acknowledge

That I’ve been hurt

That you let it happen

And that you didn’t even ignore it

You simply

Stood back

And let it happen"

I really loved those lines. I was just going to paste the last three lines of the above, but then I realised that I liked even more :)
5/14/2009 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
love the repitition technique used here and the italicizing- it puts the oomph into the powerful words that makes the reader more emotional. very pleased 2 hear you got your apology! :) nice job
5/10/2009 c1 5blackberrycobbler
gotta say, personal experience always makes the best writings. touches that little nerve that makes people go "wow".
5/10/2009 c1 16maple the wacky tree
aw. how sad. but beautifully done. and good for you for finally getting that apology.

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