
6/30/2011 c1 Zaina Anastacia
Awww this is so sweet! I would love for a guy to wait for me, and be that in love with me...I am such hopeless romantic .
Awww this is so sweet! I would love for a guy to wait for me, and be that in love with me...I am such hopeless romantic .
1/16/2010 c1 Artume
Haha, that was nice! And fun, if you get what I mean! =) Contest is, unfortunately over...but I really like it! =D
Haha, that was nice! And fun, if you get what I mean! =) Contest is, unfortunately over...but I really like it! =D
12/30/2009 c1
6Yoron
Real good. One thing though. You write the male character from a female perspective right?
And then you start with him being a friend :)
Well it happens, probably more often than I think, but mostly I would say that when you meet someone seriously, it will probably be someone you don't know that good,as a educated guess perhaps a friends friend, type.
This 'friend thing' is very much a female thing, and most guys aren't really into it. Some 'smart' ones are, but most guys will fall for that girl they either don't dare to speak too, or that don't want to speak to them. Depending on whom they present themselves to be naturally :)
But you're good.

Real good. One thing though. You write the male character from a female perspective right?
And then you start with him being a friend :)
Well it happens, probably more often than I think, but mostly I would say that when you meet someone seriously, it will probably be someone you don't know that good,as a educated guess perhaps a friends friend, type.
This 'friend thing' is very much a female thing, and most guys aren't really into it. Some 'smart' ones are, but most guys will fall for that girl they either don't dare to speak too, or that don't want to speak to them. Depending on whom they present themselves to be naturally :)
But you're good.
9/12/2009 c1
9Lily Llynn
This is ridiculously happy. I wish I knew South Pacific so I would know what song you're talking about, but this is highly cute (not sure how theater buffs would respond to the alterations, though). Still, I really liked this and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:

This is ridiculously happy. I wish I knew South Pacific so I would know what song you're talking about, but this is highly cute (not sure how theater buffs would respond to the alterations, though). Still, I really liked this and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
5/17/2009 c1
19toffeecakesxox
aw, i'm glad bringmayflowers asked me to read this!
it was so adorable!
i love Jay; i love Honey.
i love this story!
and i listened to the song; really adds to the awesome. :)
-toffeecakesxox,

aw, i'm glad bringmayflowers asked me to read this!
it was so adorable!
i love Jay; i love Honey.
i love this story!
and i listened to the song; really adds to the awesome. :)
-toffeecakesxox,
5/14/2009 c1
49Pinkamoo
That would have been mortifying. Having that play and the song lol! Very good and amusing! I like-y!

That would have been mortifying. Having that play and the song lol! Very good and amusing! I like-y!
5/11/2009 c1 hiya
More!
More!