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5/21/2012 c1 46SwimmingThroughExistance
loved it! 'twas aDORable!

ooh, and well written
6/30/2011 c1 Zaina Anastacia
Awww this is so sweet! I would love for a guy to wait for me, and be that in love with me...I am such hopeless romantic .
1/16/2010 c1 Artume
Haha, that was nice! And fun, if you get what I mean! =) Contest is, unfortunately over...but I really like it! =D
12/30/2009 c1 6Yoron
Real good. One thing though. You write the male character from a female perspective right?

And then you start with him being a friend :)

Well it happens, probably more often than I think, but mostly I would say that when you meet someone seriously, it will probably be someone you don't know that good,as a educated guess perhaps a friends friend, type.

This 'friend thing' is very much a female thing, and most guys aren't really into it. Some 'smart' ones are, but most guys will fall for that girl they either don't dare to speak too, or that don't want to speak to them. Depending on whom they present themselves to be naturally :)

But you're good.
9/12/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
This is ridiculously happy. I wish I knew South Pacific so I would know what song you're talking about, but this is highly cute (not sure how theater buffs would respond to the alterations, though). Still, I really liked this and I'm very glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
8/26/2009 c1 8Emerald123
aw the sweetest story ever. it made me ridiculously happy too. did you win?
8/12/2009 c1 x3life
aw whats a cute one-shot =)
5/27/2009 c1 AdiGal
That was incredibly cute! Good job.

-AG :)
5/17/2009 c1 19toffeecakesxox
aw, i'm glad bringmayflowers asked me to read this!

it was so adorable!

i love Jay; i love Honey.

i love this story!

and i listened to the song; really adds to the awesome. :)

5/14/2009 c1 49Pinkamoo
That would have been mortifying. Having that play and the song lol! Very good and amusing! I like-y!
5/12/2009 c1 DLETE THIS OLD
lol this makes me happy too :D
5/11/2009 c1 hiya
5/11/2009 c1 6anita darling
:) This was really cute, good job!
5/11/2009 c1 5sparkalie
I love it! South Pacific is one of my fave movies. (Thanks to my mom) Actually my favorite song there is Some Enchanted Evening but I also thought that Honey Bun was simply out of this world in hilarity. Nice work!
5/10/2009 c1 1Incohesive
I love it :D
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