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5/10/2001 c1 Jack Bullions
I'd say have the victim kill'em all and let God sort'em out later. :) Not bad. I felt abit nervous reading about a vampire showing compassion out of the whim, or an undisturbed house in the middle of urban world. Maybe if perhaps these kids were to fool around in an abandoned house away from society? e.g. inside dense forest like a park. I thought it was kind of odd that a vampire(s) would pick his abode that's clearly out in the open. Maybe the town is spread out like that. You got the transformation right though.

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