for Mister Moon5/17/2009 c1 
47Helizabeth
i liked it! slightly confusing, because at first Kalani sounds like a girl's name, but good. I'm writing a similar story where the moon is a girl and the sun is a guy, so i read yours to see a different point of view, and i enjoyed it.
47Helizabethi liked it! slightly confusing, because at first Kalani sounds like a girl's name, but good. I'm writing a similar story where the moon is a girl and the sun is a guy, so i read yours to see a different point of view, and i enjoyed it.
5/12/2009 c1 1Jaelyn Disraeli
Cute! It's a creative take on the sun, moon and stars, but could you tell us why exactly Samson won't sleep with Diana? If I were him, I'd be pretty mad that Diana tricked me, you know. @@ Oh well.
1Jaelyn DisraeliCute! It's a creative take on the sun, moon and stars, but could you tell us why exactly Samson won't sleep with Diana? If I were him, I'd be pretty mad that Diana tricked me, you know. @@ Oh well.
5/11/2009 c1 26Mirabella
I LOVE this! Its so sad and lovely and ironic and happy! I'm going to favourite it!
26MirabellaI LOVE this! Its so sad and lovely and ironic and happy! I'm going to favourite it!
5/10/2009 c1 divinexs
Interesting. It's like a bedtime story. o.o
I liked how you changed their names and had a point to the story. Poor Samson, he must have been thinking that he cheated on his wife all this time or something.
Interesting. It's like a bedtime story. o.o
I liked how you changed their names and had a point to the story. Poor Samson, he must have been thinking that he cheated on his wife all this time or something.