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5/16/2009 c1 Bellanyx
Well, it's about one of two quotes. Either "All the world's a stage, And all the men and women merely players" or ""Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player, That struts and frets his hour upon the stage, And then is heard no more.""

Either way, awesome poem. Your last lines are strong, your whole poem is crisp, shows lots of depth and you use strong words.

Keep Writing!

Bette
5/11/2009 c1 113403 Forbidden
I really like what you did in this poem, nice work. The rhyme scheme works well the way you used it, and the words flow nicely. I love the lines "I wonder if I can better the set/Before I leave the stage," great lines for life in general. I don't suppose I could guess the entire poem's meaning correctly, but to me, it's about how life is life, it starts and ends, and in between you should be happy, be yourself, and do good. Nice work!

~mAg

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