for Mr Umpire10/26/2010 c1 WishBlade
That was so cute! Rose was adorable (as was her name)! And I'm from Pittsburgh, so I feel your pain (the Pirates...) =]
That was so cute! Rose was adorable (as was her name)! And I'm from Pittsburgh, so I feel your pain (the Pirates...) =]
12/18/2009 c1 
1eskar
basically the cutest thing ever,
but
“Nice to meet you Rose!” Mr. Umpire called to me as I walked away. Making sure Rose wasn’t watching, I flipped him the middle finger over my shoulder. I heard a throaty chuckle in the distance.
typo, right? cause her name is Rose, not her sister's?
:) like I said, it's still stellar.
1eskarbasically the cutest thing ever,
but
“Nice to meet you Rose!” Mr. Umpire called to me as I walked away. Making sure Rose wasn’t watching, I flipped him the middle finger over my shoulder. I heard a throaty chuckle in the distance.
typo, right? cause her name is Rose, not her sister's?
:) like I said, it's still stellar.
5/17/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
One thing: “Nice to meet you Rose!” Mr. Umpire called to me as I walked away. Making sure Rose wasn’t watching, I flipped him the middle finger over my shoulder.
I think the second Rose is supposed to say Lily.
Anyway, this was cute and incredibly cliche, and I don't really know where the irony is (maybe in her cutesy name and her thorny personality? That was cheesy.), but I'm still glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnOne thing: “Nice to meet you Rose!” Mr. Umpire called to me as I walked away. Making sure Rose wasn’t watching, I flipped him the middle finger over my shoulder.
I think the second Rose is supposed to say Lily.
Anyway, this was cute and incredibly cliche, and I don't really know where the irony is (maybe in her cutesy name and her thorny personality? That was cheesy.), but I'm still glad woodstock1969 added this to our c2. (:
5/15/2009 c1 19toffeecakesxox
that. was. freaking. adorable.
:)
i love the ending!
and Rose&Paul. :D
-toffeecakesxox.
19toffeecakesxoxthat. was. freaking. adorable.
:)
i love the ending!
and Rose&Paul. :D
-toffeecakesxox.
5/12/2009 c1 7Liya Smith
um. hey there. remember me?
haha, ok i totally thought it was adorable at the end when pauls like, "why are you gunna rape me?" sigh paul, you are too cute. now before i go on, i just want you to excuse me for any spelling mistakes and such because im on my cellphone and its rather to hard to type. i keep going back and erasing. major sigh.
but, on the bright side, i totally loved lily. she wasnt mentioned that much, but the idea of her was adorable. ok. well, i have nothing other to say than it was cute, adorable, funny and quirky. mah favorite.
okay. keep updating with ur awesome stuff.
7Liya Smithum. hey there. remember me?
haha, ok i totally thought it was adorable at the end when pauls like, "why are you gunna rape me?" sigh paul, you are too cute. now before i go on, i just want you to excuse me for any spelling mistakes and such because im on my cellphone and its rather to hard to type. i keep going back and erasing. major sigh.
but, on the bright side, i totally loved lily. she wasnt mentioned that much, but the idea of her was adorable. ok. well, i have nothing other to say than it was cute, adorable, funny and quirky. mah favorite.
okay. keep updating with ur awesome stuff.
5/12/2009 c1 49Pinkamoo
I love your writing style. It's great and filled with humour-y goodness! Loved the story, too. It was like fab. Real Fab. So I'm sorry but...I'm just, maybe, I'll have to...favourite it!
Le gasp. o.o
49PinkamooI love your writing style. It's great and filled with humour-y goodness! Loved the story, too. It was like fab. Real Fab. So I'm sorry but...I'm just, maybe, I'll have to...favourite it!
Le gasp. o.o
5/12/2009 c1 OoohLookACat
i like it
it's very cute
AND i understood the beginning part
with the baseball
which is a bonus for you and your explaining skills :)
again, i mention that i like it
it's got the cuteness factor to it :P
izzie
i like it
it's very cute
AND i understood the beginning part
with the baseball
which is a bonus for you and your explaining skills :)
again, i mention that i like it
it's got the cuteness factor to it :P
izzie
5/12/2009 c1 7adoh
Loved it! This was hilarious and adorable, as well.
Glad the see the girl taking the lead in the end there. ;)
7adohLoved it! This was hilarious and adorable, as well.
Glad the see the girl taking the lead in the end there. ;)
5/11/2009 c1 monkyy109
short people rule the world ;]
RAPE lols. itll be funny if she really did yell it
anyways that was super cute ;]
short people rule the world ;]
RAPE lols. itll be funny if she really did yell it
anyways that was super cute ;]