for Addiction5/13/2009 c1 
9Mayo on toast
This is good, it's really good. I like the rhyming scheme because i like that kind of thing, and i loved the metaphors used throughout. And, also, i learnededed a new word! I never heard of anterior before. Good old dictionary... Anywho, brilliant poem, love the imagery and metaphors.
9Mayo on toastThis is good, it's really good. I like the rhyming scheme because i like that kind of thing, and i loved the metaphors used throughout. And, also, i learnededed a new word! I never heard of anterior before. Good old dictionary... Anywho, brilliant poem, love the imagery and metaphors.
5/12/2009 c1 19sosickofposers
oh wow this is really good, if you got intouch with linkin park im sure they could make this into a rap, riggin awsome!1
19sosickofposersoh wow this is really good, if you got intouch with linkin park im sure they could make this into a rap, riggin awsome!1