for Of Proud Spirits and Losses at Night5/6/2013 c37 bats13
I've finally got around to finishing this story, and I must say it's brilliant! I loved it so so much, and I've grown to adore William and Lilianna! Good job on the story, fantastic work!
I've finally got around to finishing this story, and I must say it's brilliant! I loved it so so much, and I've grown to adore William and Lilianna! Good job on the story, fantastic work!
4/24/2013 c9 bats13
I'm really loving this story so far! I love William's character - he seems very nice and mature. I'm hoping Lilianna will ease up on him soon, he's a great catch! Great chapter, I will definitely continue reading!
I'm really loving this story so far! I love William's character - he seems very nice and mature. I'm hoping Lilianna will ease up on him soon, he's a great catch! Great chapter, I will definitely continue reading!
2/18/2013 c37 
9TrueRebellion14
I just have to say that when I had began reading this, I was a little torn as to who's side I was on with Lilianna and William's ongoing quarreling, but at the end when the ship was sinking, I literally felt my heart being ripped to shreds when I was made to believe that William had died. I cried for hours at the thought of Lilianna being left with a fatherless child. This is a truly inspirational story!
9TrueRebellion14I just have to say that when I had began reading this, I was a little torn as to who's side I was on with Lilianna and William's ongoing quarreling, but at the end when the ship was sinking, I literally felt my heart being ripped to shreds when I was made to believe that William had died. I cried for hours at the thought of Lilianna being left with a fatherless child. This is a truly inspirational story!
1/21/2013 c1 xkcbby
Don't have time to login right now, however, I thought it would be helpful if I gave you the direct form to claim your work on Amazon:
gp/help/reports/infringement
So sorry you have to do this ):
Here is the ASIN to the scum's shit of a thievery: B00939IT2U
Hopefully, this will make the process a little easier.
Best,
xkc
Don't have time to login right now, however, I thought it would be helpful if I gave you the direct form to claim your work on Amazon:
gp/help/reports/infringement
So sorry you have to do this ):
Here is the ASIN to the scum's shit of a thievery: B00939IT2U
Hopefully, this will make the process a little easier.
Best,
xkc
1/18/2013 c38 27058
This is an amazing story and I'm not surprised that someone would want to claim this work as their own but I'm sorry it has happened to you.
Thnx for the awesome read,
Xxx
This is an amazing story and I'm not surprised that someone would want to claim this work as their own but I'm sorry it has happened to you.
Thnx for the awesome read,
Xxx
1/8/2013 c38 cinnamonmyra1997
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I called Amazon today and filed a report on the author to get the story removed. I simply hate that this has happened to you. The same happened to me a few months ago and I deleted my story. Please contact me if you have any questions.
Hi there! I just wanted to let you know that I called Amazon today and filed a report on the author to get the story removed. I simply hate that this has happened to you. The same happened to me a few months ago and I deleted my story. Please contact me if you have any questions.
1/5/2013 c38 maddithepenguin
I am so sorry that your work has been plagiarized. I think that it is a complete and utter disgrace that some one would steal a story for the sole purpose of making a quick buck. I looked at the Amazon reviews and several people have called her out. Hopefully everything will work out in you favor.
I am so sorry that your work has been plagiarized. I think that it is a complete and utter disgrace that some one would steal a story for the sole purpose of making a quick buck. I looked at the Amazon reviews and several people have called her out. Hopefully everything will work out in you favor.
1/4/2013 c38 7WindLessNiteZ
l have to say this is an absolutely devastating news and l am sorry that it had happen to you . Just last night another one of my favorite author had the same thing happened to her . lt broke my heart to hear how devastated the both of you are . l hope from the bottom of my heart that both of you may stay strong and continue to let your imagination flow even if it's not on FP . All the best and please know you would always have the support from us faithful readers .
Good Luck and may god bless . )
7WindLessNiteZl have to say this is an absolutely devastating news and l am sorry that it had happen to you . Just last night another one of my favorite author had the same thing happened to her . lt broke my heart to hear how devastated the both of you are . l hope from the bottom of my heart that both of you may stay strong and continue to let your imagination flow even if it's not on FP . All the best and please know you would always have the support from us faithful readers .
Good Luck and may god bless . )
1/3/2013 c2 2worthwritingfor
Hi, I don't know if you are aware of this, but your story has been plagiarized and is currently being sold on Amazon.
Fated-A-Novel-ebook/dp/B00939IT2U
I don't know if the link will show up.
Christina Sirignano is the name of the person who stole it and she renamed the book Fated. I am so sorry. :/
2worthwritingforHi, I don't know if you are aware of this, but your story has been plagiarized and is currently being sold on Amazon.
Fated-A-Novel-ebook/dp/B00939IT2U
I don't know if the link will show up.
Christina Sirignano is the name of the person who stole it and she renamed the book Fated. I am so sorry. :/
8/18/2011 c37 11Luv and Peace
LOVED it! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! How slowly Lilianna and William fall in love, loved the humour. You had me at the edge of my seat when Titanic was about to sink (and even after when with the whole, OMG WILLIAM IS ALIVE?). I hoped that Harrison would have made it too... anyway, keep writing. You're very talented!
11Luv and PeaceLOVED it! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story! How slowly Lilianna and William fall in love, loved the humour. You had me at the edge of my seat when Titanic was about to sink (and even after when with the whole, OMG WILLIAM IS ALIVE?). I hoped that Harrison would have made it too... anyway, keep writing. You're very talented!
5/11/2011 c18 numnuts
I thought I'd give this story a chance, but nothing has happened for a long while, and this keeping the baby a secret from her husband thing was silly anyway and it has quickly got old. Lilliana is a very silly character and I have had no sympathy with her at all. Plus why is he still calling her 'Lilliana'? It is a bit of a mouthful and I think he would have shortened it by now.
Also, you mentioned them going around in carriages... they're rich, they would so be in cars by now.
Over all its okay, but very boring. You need to build up sympathy for your main characters, because they are just about all horrible. Jane could be Liliana and vice versa. I hate Liliana - a horrible, spoilt, foolish little bit-ch.
Keep writing, you'll get better, but someone had to be the one to tell you your main character is terrible and the plotline is boring. They should have gone to the titanic LONG ago instead of traipsing about the country getting absolutely NOWHERE!
I thought I'd give this story a chance, but nothing has happened for a long while, and this keeping the baby a secret from her husband thing was silly anyway and it has quickly got old. Lilliana is a very silly character and I have had no sympathy with her at all. Plus why is he still calling her 'Lilliana'? It is a bit of a mouthful and I think he would have shortened it by now.
Also, you mentioned them going around in carriages... they're rich, they would so be in cars by now.
Over all its okay, but very boring. You need to build up sympathy for your main characters, because they are just about all horrible. Jane could be Liliana and vice versa. I hate Liliana - a horrible, spoilt, foolish little bit-ch.
Keep writing, you'll get better, but someone had to be the one to tell you your main character is terrible and the plotline is boring. They should have gone to the titanic LONG ago instead of traipsing about the country getting absolutely NOWHERE!
11/21/2010 c11 Holly Jay Platt
Absolutely love it so far, but I do hope it ends sadly.
One thing over all from the chapters I haven't reviewed: some things are dated. ("come crying to me when..." "edgy" "mess with:)
I have to go to bed, then a ton of other stuff, so you might not hear from me for a while.
-Holly J.
Absolutely love it so far, but I do hope it ends sadly.
One thing over all from the chapters I haven't reviewed: some things are dated. ("come crying to me when..." "edgy" "mess with:)
I have to go to bed, then a ton of other stuff, so you might not hear from me for a while.
-Holly J.
11/21/2010 c6 Holly Jay Platt
Chapter 4:
On the last chapter, you called Mrs. Calhoun by Mrs. Hurst, caused some confusion. You changed the wedding date between chapters - one day, it was the eighth, another day, it was the ninth.
I'm going to go back on what I said. Not "Anna Karenina." This chapter felt very The Other Boelyn Girl (movie, not book).
"don't come crying to me when..." I don't believe this phrase wasn't around.
-Holly J.
Chapter 4:
On the last chapter, you called Mrs. Calhoun by Mrs. Hurst, caused some confusion. You changed the wedding date between chapters - one day, it was the eighth, another day, it was the ninth.
I'm going to go back on what I said. Not "Anna Karenina." This chapter felt very The Other Boelyn Girl (movie, not book).
"don't come crying to me when..." I don't believe this phrase wasn't around.
-Holly J.
11/21/2010 c5 Holly Jay Platt
I like this story so far. I hope you manage to catch your other mistakes throughout the story. These are the end of my mistake-catching days. Only plot points are to be noted now.
Good luck and happy editing.
-Holly J. Platt.
I like this story so far. I hope you manage to catch your other mistakes throughout the story. These are the end of my mistake-catching days. Only plot points are to be noted now.
Good luck and happy editing.
-Holly J. Platt.