for Love all gone5/16/2009 c1 
4Anti-Christ's Angel
If I were you I would create a new paragraph everytime I changed speakers. Other than that, I like the descriptions in these piece and I like how it's short and to the point.
4Anti-Christ's AngelIf I were you I would create a new paragraph everytime I changed speakers. Other than that, I like the descriptions in these piece and I like how it's short and to the point.