for Little South of Sanity7/4/2009 c3 tripnfallbri
oh the plot thickens! I've been dying for an update and definitely wasn't disappointed by this chapter.
I really love the brotherly bond Josh and Ben share. It's just adorable. I love their banter, it always makes me laugh. I'm really curious to how their bond will stand when the truth finally comes out though...hopefully it wion't be broken!
Ok and Phil and Karen are precious! They are so sweet and welcoming. I instantly fell in love with them, especially Karen. She's so motherly and understanding (not to mention hilarious, you got her motherly, coddling anger down just perfect!). I have a feeling she will play a big part in Thea telling the truth.
As for Thea and Ben, it's so obvious they aren't over each other yet. The tension and chemistry between them is so strong. I really can't wait to find out what exactly happened between them and why they are so keen on forgetting the past.
Seriously can't wait for more! Great chapter!
/Bri
oh the plot thickens! I've been dying for an update and definitely wasn't disappointed by this chapter.
I really love the brotherly bond Josh and Ben share. It's just adorable. I love their banter, it always makes me laugh. I'm really curious to how their bond will stand when the truth finally comes out though...hopefully it wion't be broken!
Ok and Phil and Karen are precious! They are so sweet and welcoming. I instantly fell in love with them, especially Karen. She's so motherly and understanding (not to mention hilarious, you got her motherly, coddling anger down just perfect!). I have a feeling she will play a big part in Thea telling the truth.
As for Thea and Ben, it's so obvious they aren't over each other yet. The tension and chemistry between them is so strong. I really can't wait to find out what exactly happened between them and why they are so keen on forgetting the past.
Seriously can't wait for more! Great chapter!
/Bri
6/30/2009 c3 Alenor
oh can't wait for more to see if she tells josh what's going on. i hope she does, i really wanna find out more to the story too! ~ Alenor
oh can't wait for more to see if she tells josh what's going on. i hope she does, i really wanna find out more to the story too! ~ Alenor
6/29/2009 c3 chng234
i can imagine how difficult it was for both thea n ben to had that family dinner. they shld tell the truth to josh. i have a feeling that thea still love ben. so is ben . i wonder y did they break up
i can imagine how difficult it was for both thea n ben to had that family dinner. they shld tell the truth to josh. i have a feeling that thea still love ben. so is ben . i wonder y did they break up
6/29/2009 c2 
4lost-pfreak23
i'm completely sucked into this story and am so excited to read more! please update soon!
4lost-pfreak23i'm completely sucked into this story and am so excited to read more! please update soon!
6/16/2009 c2 ess3sandra
wowwowwow, but they still love eachother, right? and i think you need to tell the stoy of them, how they ,et and why they broke up!
wowwowwow, but they still love eachother, right? and i think you need to tell the stoy of them, how they ,et and why they broke up!
6/16/2009 c2 tripnfallbri
Okay, this story is already so good! I am utterly and completely in love with it already! I don't understand why you don't have more reviews because you certainly deserve them. The writing is good, the plot is hilarious and proving to be more than just a romantic comedy (what with the hints at a dark past and all), and the characters are great.
I already love the characters. I feel like I can connect and relate with both Thea and Ben and even Josh. I too love making lists! (Even if I don't always follow them, I just feel much more in control when I make lists and not as overwhelmed)
I already have a feeling, I'll be feeling torn in two soon when Thea has to choose between the 2 brothers. Josh is a sweetheart, the perfect guy who's just clueless about this whole ordeal, but Ben and Thea obviously had something big and still do. The chemistry and physical attraction is blaringly obvious still. I already have a soft spot for them and can't wait to find out more about their past. (really piqued my interest with the flashback of Thea fainting once, lying in pool of blood)(oh, p.s. for some reason I picture Bradley Cooper as Ben, maybe it's because I just saw the Hangover...but yeah :), just fyi)
The light bits of humor sprinkled into the story are great (I laughed out loud when Ben referred to Josh as 'that' when explaining the back story of their brotherhood). Their friendly banter in the beginning was precious. I love brotherly love. There's nothing I love more than guy bffs or 2 brothers who are really close. I don't know why, but I just think it is the cutest thing in the world.
I am so anxious to see how everything plays out. Whether Ben and Thea survive living under the same roof for so long, whether Josh finds out (does he get mad when he finds out?), whether Thea ends up going to Ben, what even happened with Ben and Thea. (basically lots of whethers) Also the little rivalry with Faye is hilarious. I also love Thea's friend Leila. She's a feisty one ;). I can't wait for your next chapter! Hope to see it soon!
/Bri
Okay, this story is already so good! I am utterly and completely in love with it already! I don't understand why you don't have more reviews because you certainly deserve them. The writing is good, the plot is hilarious and proving to be more than just a romantic comedy (what with the hints at a dark past and all), and the characters are great.
I already love the characters. I feel like I can connect and relate with both Thea and Ben and even Josh. I too love making lists! (Even if I don't always follow them, I just feel much more in control when I make lists and not as overwhelmed)
I already have a feeling, I'll be feeling torn in two soon when Thea has to choose between the 2 brothers. Josh is a sweetheart, the perfect guy who's just clueless about this whole ordeal, but Ben and Thea obviously had something big and still do. The chemistry and physical attraction is blaringly obvious still. I already have a soft spot for them and can't wait to find out more about their past. (really piqued my interest with the flashback of Thea fainting once, lying in pool of blood)(oh, p.s. for some reason I picture Bradley Cooper as Ben, maybe it's because I just saw the Hangover...but yeah :), just fyi)
The light bits of humor sprinkled into the story are great (I laughed out loud when Ben referred to Josh as 'that' when explaining the back story of their brotherhood). Their friendly banter in the beginning was precious. I love brotherly love. There's nothing I love more than guy bffs or 2 brothers who are really close. I don't know why, but I just think it is the cutest thing in the world.
I am so anxious to see how everything plays out. Whether Ben and Thea survive living under the same roof for so long, whether Josh finds out (does he get mad when he finds out?), whether Thea ends up going to Ben, what even happened with Ben and Thea. (basically lots of whethers) Also the little rivalry with Faye is hilarious. I also love Thea's friend Leila. She's a feisty one ;). I can't wait for your next chapter! Hope to see it soon!
/Bri
6/15/2009 c2 Alenor
hmm ok then, what's this fainted in a pool of blood thing from the past? can't wait to find out! cya next time ~ Alenor
hmm ok then, what's this fainted in a pool of blood thing from the past? can't wait to find out! cya next time ~ Alenor
5/13/2009 c1 Alenor
oh i can't wait for more to find out the story between thea and ben, and to see what josh thinks of it all too! cya next time ~ Alenor
oh i can't wait for more to find out the story between thea and ben, and to see what josh thinks of it all too! cya next time ~ Alenor