for Fight12/23/2009 c1 
4HighOnBrokenWings
Such beautiful language.
It flows like water.
So beautiful.
Yet the meaning is so profound
So deep.
I feel really smart when I read it, even though I dont fully get what exactly it is that you're trying to convey across.
Still.
Amazing
4HighOnBrokenWingsSuch beautiful language.
It flows like water.
So beautiful.
Yet the meaning is so profound
So deep.
I feel really smart when I read it, even though I dont fully get what exactly it is that you're trying to convey across.
Still.
Amazing
5/16/2009 c1 The Concept of Breathing
Oh my wow! That was so touching! This is hands down my favorite poem.
"It is always there, hiding beneath the surface.
Mischievous and masochistic, it waits for my cry.
I falter as it coils around my heart, branding me with it's symbol.
It controls me; it has a power I cannot withstand."
That was my favorite part, this part hit me the most. I dont think you could have worded that any more beautifully, the whole poem in fact was extremely beautiful. You've got a way with words woman.
Sniff sniff, BRAVO.
Oh my wow! That was so touching! This is hands down my favorite poem.
"It is always there, hiding beneath the surface.
Mischievous and masochistic, it waits for my cry.
I falter as it coils around my heart, branding me with it's symbol.
It controls me; it has a power I cannot withstand."
That was my favorite part, this part hit me the most. I dont think you could have worded that any more beautifully, the whole poem in fact was extremely beautiful. You've got a way with words woman.
Sniff sniff, BRAVO.