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10/2/2009 c1 276Darkest Fantasy
This was pretty good. There's definitely a lot of emotion behind it, which is always great in poems like this. Sometimes emotion and connection to the piece is more important than technical things. =)
8/7/2009 c1 29hasseena
Hey there..you're Indian too. I checked your profile page because your pen name sounded familiar :)

I like the poem. It has resonance with your description of yourself as somebody who keeps his troubles to himself. The poem is a instrospective and frank voice which conveys emotions of uncertainity, debate with one's self, some confusion and desperation..quite a curry!
7/31/2009 c1 epiusnhuau
hm...itz realy nice...
6/19/2009 c1 8ChaosWithin
I like this poem alot its really romantic, in away that it solemn*sp?*.
5/16/2009 c1 2mythee
Loved the ending, it made the poem more alive.
5/16/2009 c1 4The-Golden-Hour
to be part of a soul curry - :L haha,weird x]
5/16/2009 c1 2MasqueradeAngel
This was really well written and i loved the emotion to it

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