for Sacrifice10/2/2009 c1 
276Darkest Fantasy
This was pretty good. There's definitely a lot of emotion behind it, which is always great in poems like this. Sometimes emotion and connection to the piece is more important than technical things. =)
276Darkest FantasyThis was pretty good. There's definitely a lot of emotion behind it, which is always great in poems like this. Sometimes emotion and connection to the piece is more important than technical things. =)
8/7/2009 c1 29hasseena
Hey there..you're Indian too. I checked your profile page because your pen name sounded familiar :)
I like the poem. It has resonance with your description of yourself as somebody who keeps his troubles to himself. The poem is a instrospective and frank voice which conveys emotions of uncertainity, debate with one's self, some confusion and desperation..quite a curry!
29hasseenaHey there..you're Indian too. I checked your profile page because your pen name sounded familiar :)
I like the poem. It has resonance with your description of yourself as somebody who keeps his troubles to himself. The poem is a instrospective and frank voice which conveys emotions of uncertainity, debate with one's self, some confusion and desperation..quite a curry!
7/31/2009 c1 epiusnhuau
hm...itz realy nice...
hm...itz realy nice...