for The Cycle
5/23/2009 c1 66Chandra Grace
Wow. That was a very stating poem that flowed. Your rhyming worked. Good job?
5/16/2009 c1 56Luna Turner
the last few lines were really impacting, and made the poem.
I really thought it was full of more anger than tragedy, but that's just me.
I feel deeply for both participants in this poem.
You conveyed the emotion well.