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5/23/2009 c1 66Chandra Grace
Wow. That was a very stating poem that flowed. Your rhyming worked. Good job?
5/16/2009 c1 56Luna Turner
Wow

the last few lines were really impacting, and made the poem.

Great piece

I really thought it was full of more anger than tragedy, but that's just me.

I feel deeply for both participants in this poem.

You conveyed the emotion well.

~Luna Turner

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