for Oranges7/29/2010 c1 
2NeptunesBlue
i'd definitely enjoy reading more of this. it's a welcome change from the fantasy/sci-fi stuff i've been reading a lot of =]
2NeptunesBluei'd definitely enjoy reading more of this. it's a welcome change from the fantasy/sci-fi stuff i've been reading a lot of =]
7/20/2010 c1 179NearlyPrescient
I think the last line is a perfectly used allusion. It's interesting how you take the entire story and just change how a reader feels about it with just a line or two.
179NearlyPrescientI think the last line is a perfectly used allusion. It's interesting how you take the entire story and just change how a reader feels about it with just a line or two.
6/21/2009 c1 Sour Smoothies
i like it. vague at the end. still trying to figue out what the last quote means...good story. really poetic
i like it. vague at the end. still trying to figue out what the last quote means...good story. really poetic