5/16/2009 c1 3MissyCrelliot
Sweet. I love to read about people working for some reason, like all the stuff that goes on behind the scenes like free donuts and stuff. Cool start.

uh... constructive criticism... Uhm, the only thing i can think of is to make this longer. I do like the simplicity of your sentences though, don't change that, and you didn't over-detail things, which is good. Just the way i like it.

Good job

-Missy C