for Moonlight on a Starless Night12/29/2012 c21 
1omypineapple.awesome
Loved it! Ending is perfect! Perfect, better, awesomer version on Twilight. :D
1omypineapple.awesomeLoved it! Ending is perfect! Perfect, better, awesomer version on Twilight. :D
7/30/2012 c22 lightXdarkness
This is such a beautiful story. The characters are marevlous and everything is well detailed. I personally read this story like 2 years ago and just had to search it again. Through my endless determination and my epic fails, I managed to find it and I still can't help but marvel at it again as if this was the first time I had read such a read.
I am excited for you that you are thinking of taking a serious step to what could be or is your career. I send you a handful of luck as you maze your way through the punlishing agency! Keep up the good work. _
This is such a beautiful story. The characters are marevlous and everything is well detailed. I personally read this story like 2 years ago and just had to search it again. Through my endless determination and my epic fails, I managed to find it and I still can't help but marvel at it again as if this was the first time I had read such a read.
I am excited for you that you are thinking of taking a serious step to what could be or is your career. I send you a handful of luck as you maze your way through the punlishing agency! Keep up the good work. _
8/18/2010 c10 6Kikinii
Okay I'm just going to say that this chapter was fucking awesome. When I was reading the dream I thought thats what was hapening. I was like "Oh shit he killed her parents! Even when they were nice to him!" Then I found out it was just a dream. I think this is a sick chapter I cant wait to read the rest of the story. ^_^
Thanks for writng this.
6KikiniiOkay I'm just going to say that this chapter was fucking awesome. When I was reading the dream I thought thats what was hapening. I was like "Oh shit he killed her parents! Even when they were nice to him!" Then I found out it was just a dream. I think this is a sick chapter I cant wait to read the rest of the story. ^_^
Thanks for writng this.
3/15/2010 c22 lostlette
AW I LOVE IT! Thats a good way to end the story too. But I'd also like to read the whole thing. You know to see if her vision really comes true. Let me know thanks. :)
AW I LOVE IT! Thats a good way to end the story too. But I'd also like to read the whole thing. You know to see if her vision really comes true. Let me know thanks. :)
11/26/2009 c5 8underwaterwriter
Haha, I'm reading this story for real, but I have one question: does "I" in your story refer to Sary or Luna?
8underwaterwriterHaha, I'm reading this story for real, but I have one question: does "I" in your story refer to Sary or Luna?
11/13/2009 c1 31malinaf
hey,
i love this story. it has emotion. is it finished? i'm not quite sure. but so far it's great. good job! btw you're a great writer. don't stop writing.
31malinafhey,
i love this story. it has emotion. is it finished? i'm not quite sure. but so far it's great. good job! btw you're a great writer. don't stop writing.
10/21/2009 c1 7Whyler
This is absolutely amazing. Though I personally would love to see the real ending here on the Internet since publishing is a pain in the butt, I think that for you personally it would be a great thing to get it published. It's a really good story, and I'd totally buy a copy.
Whyler
7WhylerThis is absolutely amazing. Though I personally would love to see the real ending here on the Internet since publishing is a pain in the butt, I think that for you personally it would be a great thing to get it published. It's a really good story, and I'd totally buy a copy.
Whyler
9/22/2009 c22 darrena
I believe that you should definetily publish this story! It's very beautiful and has lots of potential. It would be a pity to post it for free when you could make money out of something you like. If you sell the e-book version ... I would buy it :D Good Luck
I believe that you should definetily publish this story! It's very beautiful and has lots of potential. It would be a pity to post it for free when you could make money out of something you like. If you sell the e-book version ... I would buy it :D Good Luck
9/19/2009 c22 InTheMindOfARandomThinker
Im a fan of this story so much. In my own opinon i think that u should get it published. Less why for anyone to copy it then.
If you do get it published i would SO be one of the first people to buy it. You are such a great writter, dont let it go to waist. Publish it.
In the end it is up to you what you do, but publishing it would be th best thing to do.
If you do publish you so have to let me know. I think this story is great and could be huge one day. :)
Im a fan of this story so much. In my own opinon i think that u should get it published. Less why for anyone to copy it then.
If you do get it published i would SO be one of the first people to buy it. You are such a great writter, dont let it go to waist. Publish it.
In the end it is up to you what you do, but publishing it would be th best thing to do.
If you do publish you so have to let me know. I think this story is great and could be huge one day. :)
9/19/2009 c1 Lizzycello
Pretty good story! :D I loved the dream chapter, I think that was the best one. So much drama. 8D
The only thing that bothers me about this story is that it's a self-insertion... and your character is a mary-sue... but that can't be changed now. I still really liked it. You're a very good author. :D
Pretty good story! :D I loved the dream chapter, I think that was the best one. So much drama. 8D
The only thing that bothers me about this story is that it's a self-insertion... and your character is a mary-sue... but that can't be changed now. I still really liked it. You're a very good author. :D
9/18/2009 c22 CrazyTwizler2
Oh god, Please keep posting it! I just read the latest chapter its Ah-mazing! I absolustly adore it! I am so anxious to see what happens please keep posting!
Oh god, Please keep posting it! I just read the latest chapter its Ah-mazing! I absolustly adore it! I am so anxious to see what happens please keep posting!
9/12/2009 c21 darrena
Great story! I really like the plot and the way you are writing it :) Looking forward to more :)
Great story! I really like the plot and the way you are writing it :) Looking forward to more :)
8/30/2009 c20 light.and.darkness.angel
it was cute!...except for the pet store part that was disgusting...evil owner manager...grr loll
update soon!
it was cute!...except for the pet store part that was disgusting...evil owner manager...grr loll
update soon!
8/26/2009 c19 CrazyTwizler2
Omg I loved it! :) This should seriously get published! Can't wait for your next one! :D
-Dawn!
Omg I loved it! :) This should seriously get published! Can't wait for your next one! :D
-Dawn!