8/5/2020 c1 Guest
aww this was soooo cutr

4/3/2011 c1 9Spontaneous Juju
Yeah... so... remember how I said I was going to stop being all creepy and fan-girly and hurry up and go to bed like a normal person?

I lied. :D And this story was MAGNIFICENT. But now I'm actually going to get OFF my laptop and sleep so I don't look like an extra from "Night of the Living Dead" tomorrow. Or, actually, maybe "Shaun of the Dead" or "Zombieland," just with less blood. Like, WAY less blood.

Hm. I'm pretty sure I have now convinced you completely of my oddness... but personally I love reviews, even if they are rambly and strange, so hopefully you don't mind. :D Again, you're brilliant and I'm going to have a lot of fun NOT being responsible and getting school stuff done like I'm supposed to for the next however-long-it-takes-me-to-read-the-rest-of-these. So yay for that. :)

-Spontaneous Juju

P.S. Wonderful job on the guy's perspective, of course. I've always had trouble with that, myself, but I think this was great. :) Not too caveman, but enough to be realistic and strangely sweet of him. :D

1/17/2010 c1 ess3sandra
haha, her uncle, that would be wierd.

9/1/2009 c1 6StarrburstNoodles
"I think you broke a rib, Cheri."

xD

Hahaha. poor Darren.

This was sweet.

And I love me some badboys. :)

~SN

7/1/2009 c1 10random smiles
“But you don’t even seem to notice at all, you’re hot and cold, like that song by Katy Perry." - HAHA! that made me laugh :)

The girl's name Cheri Avenue is cute, by the way.

I really enjoyed reading this story!

Keep up the good work and keep on writing ^^

6/8/2009 c1 1PeterMoore
'damned straight' - i love that part

5/25/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
It's a little confusing at the end and definitely cliche (but that's okay), and I wish we had more awareness of his daredevil-ness at the beginning, and well, I kinda wish she made him suffer more (because that'd be more fun). XD But I liked it, and I'm very glad Queen of Absolutely Everything added this to our c2. (:

5/20/2009 c1 Hazelnut Romance
cute.