for The Shed10/2/2009 c1 
276Darkest Fantasy
Well...I can say that I've never heard a poem about a shed before! Haha...It's unique, which is nice. You get sick of reading the same old stuff after a while. So good job with thinking outside the box...or shed as it may be in this case. =) I haven't heard personification like this for a while. Thanks for the interesting read.
276Darkest FantasyWell...I can say that I've never heard a poem about a shed before! Haha...It's unique, which is nice. You get sick of reading the same old stuff after a while. So good job with thinking outside the box...or shed as it may be in this case. =) I haven't heard personification like this for a while. Thanks for the interesting read.
6/27/2009 c1 Rj
hmm...
really interesting choice of topic...its pleasantly surprising to see you thought this up...good attempt..
hmm...
really interesting choice of topic...its pleasantly surprising to see you thought this up...good attempt..
5/18/2009 c1 24James Michaelis
Very well-written. I like the personification of this shed. As a whole, this poem creates empathy in the reader, which is always very good in any literary piece.
Keep up the good work!
-Angel
24James MichaelisVery well-written. I like the personification of this shed. As a whole, this poem creates empathy in the reader, which is always very good in any literary piece.
Keep up the good work!
-Angel