for The Chase5/18/2009 c1 
1CWB
Very nicely done, this poem is chilling and elegant without coming off as overly melodramatic. "Eyebrows on tiptoes, erect like needles" in particular is an excellent use of visual imagery that sticks in one's mind. The restless conclusion avoids neatly tying things up, which is a perfect note to end on given the subject matter.
1CWBVery nicely done, this poem is chilling and elegant without coming off as overly melodramatic. "Eyebrows on tiptoes, erect like needles" in particular is an excellent use of visual imagery that sticks in one's mind. The restless conclusion avoids neatly tying things up, which is a perfect note to end on given the subject matter.