for Always Quiet I Smile3/30/2011 c1 Reetu
Very Good poem
Very Good poem
10/2/2009 c1 
276Darkest Fantasy
I like this! You seem to have total self acceptance...which is more than I can say. I know what it's like to be the 'quiet one' and I can relate to a lot of this. Good job once again. =)
276Darkest FantasyI like this! You seem to have total self acceptance...which is more than I can say. I know what it's like to be the 'quiet one' and I can relate to a lot of this. Good job once again. =)
8/11/2009 c1 29hasseena
This is a very articulate 'expression' on the poetic persona. He or she is an independent soul who is well acquainted with his/her strenghts and weaknesses; makes the most of the strenghts with little care for what others think.
The way you written it is also as if every stanza is complete in itself.
I really like the straightforward self acceptance echoed throughout the poem.
Maybe there is a little correction first line in the second stanza though..I think you mean "quietness".
29hasseenaThis is a very articulate 'expression' on the poetic persona. He or she is an independent soul who is well acquainted with his/her strenghts and weaknesses; makes the most of the strenghts with little care for what others think.
The way you written it is also as if every stanza is complete in itself.
I really like the straightforward self acceptance echoed throughout the poem.
Maybe there is a little correction first line in the second stanza though..I think you mean "quietness".
5/23/2009 c1 36Kate Marshall
Your writing and the rhymes stick out the most in this piece. So I'll start with the writing: It's so interesting to read this because it's very different from a lot of poems. Lots of big words. :) You sound very smart and there's not an ounce of self-hate in this. Which we have to admit, there's quite a lot of those poems on FP. I like the way you write that you're comfortable with who you are.
Second, the rhymes are fantastic. I don't see many people who use feminine rhymes and I'm glad to see this. It's nice that someone still does. :D
Wonderful job,
-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)
36Kate MarshallYour writing and the rhymes stick out the most in this piece. So I'll start with the writing: It's so interesting to read this because it's very different from a lot of poems. Lots of big words. :) You sound very smart and there's not an ounce of self-hate in this. Which we have to admit, there's quite a lot of those poems on FP. I like the way you write that you're comfortable with who you are.
Second, the rhymes are fantastic. I don't see many people who use feminine rhymes and I'm glad to see this. It's nice that someone still does. :D
Wonderful job,
-Peach/Kate, from the Review Marathon (link's in the profile!)
5/21/2009 c1 Ankur Gupta
Very different..superbly put .. !
Very different..superbly put .. !