for Spectral Fantasy1/11/2010 c1 
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This is really well-written. I love the way you created such dazzling imagery while allowing the poem to flow freely. I really like the way in which you use punctuation to expands your words instead of limiting them. This is a very nice poem.
113403 ForbiddenThis is really well-written. I love the way you created such dazzling imagery while allowing the poem to flow freely. I really like the way in which you use punctuation to expands your words instead of limiting them. This is a very nice poem.