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12All Over You
great first couple of chapters. i'm interested to see how this plays out :]
12All Over Yougreat first couple of chapters. i'm interested to see how this plays out :]
7/17/2009 c2 5CuriousContradiction
Hey,
There wasn't a way to PM you, so I'm putting this in a review. I hope you don't mind because at least it looks like you've gotten more reviews on this story!
I've read the book "Bird By Bird" too! It definitely has a lot of tips.
I would be honored if you could check out my story too. If you're too busy (there are four chapters), that's fine, but any feedback would be much appreciated.
5CuriousContradictionHey,
There wasn't a way to PM you, so I'm putting this in a review. I hope you don't mind because at least it looks like you've gotten more reviews on this story!
I've read the book "Bird By Bird" too! It definitely has a lot of tips.
I would be honored if you could check out my story too. If you're too busy (there are four chapters), that's fine, but any feedback would be much appreciated.
7/17/2009 c3 2emmasofie
cool chapter! i liked it, but im kinda confused...
is this later or something?
anyways, even though it was slightly confusing it was a really good chapter!
please update soon!
xoxo
Emsy
2emmasofiecool chapter! i liked it, but im kinda confused...
is this later or something?
anyways, even though it was slightly confusing it was a really good chapter!
please update soon!
xoxo
Emsy
7/16/2009 c3 5CuriousContradiction
Hey there!
This is a very interesting story. :)
Two things I liked about this story in particular:
- You use the right grammar in your dialogue. You use commas instead of periods, and that makes me unbelievably happy because I'm strange like that.
- You don't go all list-of-physical-descriptions on the reader.
I also like how you frame your dialogue as well. You mention the grins, the shaking of heads, the impatience, everything. I can see it in my head, and that's great.
I hope to read more soon!
5CuriousContradictionHey there!
This is a very interesting story. :)
Two things I liked about this story in particular:
- You use the right grammar in your dialogue. You use commas instead of periods, and that makes me unbelievably happy because I'm strange like that.
- You don't go all list-of-physical-descriptions on the reader.
I also like how you frame your dialogue as well. You mention the grins, the shaking of heads, the impatience, everything. I can see it in my head, and that's great.
I hope to read more soon!
5/19/2009 c1 2emmasofie
Hey! I really like this so far, and I seriously hope that you are going to write more! It would be great if you could (:
If you do write more, could you please explain a bit more about everything, seeing as it is a bit confusing... but then again, that's what kept me reading :P
I really think you should continue, cause I like this story!
(:
2emmasofieHey! I really like this so far, and I seriously hope that you are going to write more! It would be great if you could (:
If you do write more, could you please explain a bit more about everything, seeing as it is a bit confusing... but then again, that's what kept me reading :P
I really think you should continue, cause I like this story!
(: