7/26/2009 c1 5CuriousContradiction
You really summarized a lot of the highlights of a friendship. :) One thing: you wrote id - I'd
Fast talking rhymes: Me and my friend like to pretend we can rap (We suck.)
You-had-to-be-there: Way too many ones of those. People think we're insane because we laugh at inside jokes and no one else gets it.
We'd predict how we would die: Oh yes. All the time.
And there's the ups and downs, but in the end, it's all worth it. I liked that this poem was short and simple. Very nice. :)
You really summarized a lot of the highlights of a friendship. :) One thing: you wrote id - I'd
Fast talking rhymes: Me and my friend like to pretend we can rap (We suck.)
You-had-to-be-there: Way too many ones of those. People think we're insane because we laugh at inside jokes and no one else gets it.
We'd predict how we would die: Oh yes. All the time.
And there's the ups and downs, but in the end, it's all worth it. I liked that this poem was short and simple. Very nice. :)