for Innocence and Petulance8/4/2012 c23 LovelyReader92
This was a wonderful story! I hope you plan on writing a sequal or something?
This was a wonderful story! I hope you plan on writing a sequal or something?
7/26/2012 c20 jademichellmoran
I love this chapter and I like how the story is going so far, I think its great how you've jumped from a few months to years and shown the development of Maggie and Sylas along with what Finn has been going through. I love your style of writing, don't feel disheartened by some people's comments, you can't make everyone happy, as long as you enjoy what you're writing that's all that matters. And I agree some just voice their option but don't give advice on how to help the author and I think its great that you do want to defend your work and you should its amazing :D xx
I love this chapter and I like how the story is going so far, I think its great how you've jumped from a few months to years and shown the development of Maggie and Sylas along with what Finn has been going through. I love your style of writing, don't feel disheartened by some people's comments, you can't make everyone happy, as long as you enjoy what you're writing that's all that matters. And I agree some just voice their option but don't give advice on how to help the author and I think its great that you do want to defend your work and you should its amazing :D xx
7/19/2012 c23 Robin
Easy to follow and easy to read. The characters all flow naturally, establishing strong connections with the reader. And since the writing contains sophisticated grammar as well as eloquent syntax, it was a joy to read.
AWESOME story.
Easy to follow and easy to read. The characters all flow naturally, establishing strong connections with the reader. And since the writing contains sophisticated grammar as well as eloquent syntax, it was a joy to read.
AWESOME story.
7/16/2012 c23 DA-chen1
I really love this story! Great great great! You did a wonderful job here! The plot was interesting, no loose ends and the main characters were real and natural.. as how real a demon can be! ;-)
Mira
I really love this story! Great great great! You did a wonderful job here! The plot was interesting, no loose ends and the main characters were real and natural.. as how real a demon can be! ;-)
Mira
7/16/2012 c20 DA-chen1
Overdose.. yeah, she is free with the drugs but not really.. she admitted it and then took too much. :-(
Mira
Overdose.. yeah, she is free with the drugs but not really.. she admitted it and then took too much. :-(
Mira
7/16/2012 c19 DA-chen1
Hmm.. well.. I mean, she is free.. but drugs are bad.. they do things to your brain.. well, I'm in a relationship with a medic.. I know what these things do.. but the chap was great, in spite of everything! ;-)
Mira
Hmm.. well.. I mean, she is free.. but drugs are bad.. they do things to your brain.. well, I'm in a relationship with a medic.. I know what these things do.. but the chap was great, in spite of everything! ;-)
Mira
7/16/2012 c15 DA-chen1
Wow, great! The scene was really well written! You made it pretty clear, how it is to leave your mate after the taking.. great! :-)) it's really sad, that they will never be together again, so far we know now.. :-(
Mira
Wow, great! The scene was really well written! You made it pretty clear, how it is to leave your mate after the taking.. great! :-)) it's really sad, that they will never be together again, so far we know now.. :-(
Mira