for Touched5/22/2009 c1 
5mixdown13
I really enjoyed this!
It was written very well. Though i agree with the comment above there needs to be some spacing...i did indeed get lost at points
well done =)
5mixdown13I really enjoyed this!
It was written very well. Though i agree with the comment above there needs to be some spacing...i did indeed get lost at points
well done =)
5/21/2009 c1 2Dead and Forgott'n Princess
It's awesome they way it is. There's not many poems out there that rhyme the way this one does. But some spaces could be needed. I almost got lost because they were so close together. But other than that it was okay.
2Dead and Forgott'n PrincessIt's awesome they way it is. There's not many poems out there that rhyme the way this one does. But some spaces could be needed. I almost got lost because they were so close together. But other than that it was okay.