
5/22/2009 c1
13Vegetarian Meatballs
I liked all of the personification in the poem. My favorite line was the 'roots will sob fire'. Thanks for sharing. Very nice.

I liked all of the personification in the poem. My favorite line was the 'roots will sob fire'. Thanks for sharing. Very nice.
5/21/2009 c1
9WinMyHeart5444
I really like this! It is so vivid. The adjectives you used gave me the shivers! Keep it up :)

I really like this! It is so vivid. The adjectives you used gave me the shivers! Keep it up :)