1/1/2017 c1 allancaldera
Beautiful. I love this story a lot, makes me happy. Both characters were great and It makes my heart jump with happiness when Drake start listing all the thing he knows about Ryan.
Beautiful. I love this story a lot, makes me happy. Both characters were great and It makes my heart jump with happiness when Drake start listing all the thing he knows about Ryan.
5/29/2014 c1 Isaiah
Still as awesome as the first time I read it.
Still as awesome as the first time I read it.
4/8/2014 c1 16Amber Akasha
This is so cute, and heartbreaking, and adult, and adorable, and I'm not making any sense but this story blew me away.
This is so cute, and heartbreaking, and adult, and adorable, and I'm not making any sense but this story blew me away.
12/17/2013 c1 kildren
So so so so cute.
So so so so cute.
3/30/2010 c1 3VivaLaQueen
Omg, I just have to say, this is wonderful and just amazing.
This make me "Aww" so many times.
Omg, I just have to say, this is wonderful and just amazing.
This make me "Aww" so many times.
12/5/2009 c1 25Who-Says-I-Can't-Use-A-Skillet
I truly enjoyed this oneshot. You have an excellent talent for making dialog sound natural, in a way that flows like it's a real conversation - a talent not many people do possess.
Thank you for writing such a nice little slice of life :)
- Georgia
I truly enjoyed this oneshot. You have an excellent talent for making dialog sound natural, in a way that flows like it's a real conversation - a talent not many people do possess.
Thank you for writing such a nice little slice of life :)
- Georgia
9/23/2009 c1 6letyoursoultakeflight
I like the depth you give your characters- you actually see that they know each other, its not jus the surface view...
“And I don’t look you in the eyes,” he whispers, the tears that had been pooling in his eyes starting to run down his face, “because I don’t want to see the contempt in yours. I don’t want to see how much I’ve failed, and how I’m not good enough for you because I can’t make you happy.”
- Aww! I just want to hug him!
I like the depth you give your characters- you actually see that they know each other, its not jus the surface view...
“And I don’t look you in the eyes,” he whispers, the tears that had been pooling in his eyes starting to run down his face, “because I don’t want to see the contempt in yours. I don’t want to see how much I’ve failed, and how I’m not good enough for you because I can’t make you happy.”
- Aww! I just want to hug him!
8/16/2009 c1 8dizzymslizzy
omg! that is amazing! i actually teared up while reading this... beautiful story
omg! that is amazing! i actually teared up while reading this... beautiful story
7/1/2009 c1 1CinderellaWithCombatBoots
I love this story so much! It's the best one-shot of all time :P It just completely blew me away. I mean. I know I'm small and a bit underweight but...
Kidding! Kidding...seriously. It's really amazing. The best speech of the century. Congratulations. You should be proud and everything, haha :]
I love this story so much! It's the best one-shot of all time :P It just completely blew me away. I mean. I know I'm small and a bit underweight but...
Kidding! Kidding...seriously. It's really amazing. The best speech of the century. Congratulations. You should be proud and everything, haha :]
6/9/2009 c1 5LizLizLiz
You probably don't want a review that jsust says awe, but...AWE! :)
P.S. This story is adorable. I love the cheesy-ness.I just l-l-love it!
You probably don't want a review that jsust says awe, but...AWE! :)
P.S. This story is adorable. I love the cheesy-ness.I just l-l-love it!
5/23/2009 c1 6Shadowed and Shattered
...wow. Just... wow. That was so good. And sad, and happy, and cute, and just... yeah, I'm going to stick with wow. That was amazing. You're a fantastic writer, and this piece is fantastic. Very, very well done. :)
...wow. Just... wow. That was so good. And sad, and happy, and cute, and just... yeah, I'm going to stick with wow. That was amazing. You're a fantastic writer, and this piece is fantastic. Very, very well done. :)