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7/11/2010 c1 145young and the reckless
so many things in this stood out to me. i like the honesty.

amazing.
8/26/2009 c1 in the city of neon and chrome
and this is exactly what's going on with me right now. right down to the parts about hell and the part about the song the narrorator wants the subject to replay over and over.

which honestly, is a bit terrifying, but mostly it's interesting.

feeling like you picked through my brain to write this piece aside, it really was beautiful/stunning/incredible. keep it up. :]

peace,

red.
5/24/2009 c1 GoodbyeDeleteThisPage
I have the sneaking suspicion that you are Big Brother spying on me.

But who, would admit to that, to this?
5/23/2009 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Wow. That is incredible. I love the angst of it, and the darkness, "she wants to be the reason you go to hell." Amazing work, for sure. Keep writing! :)
5/22/2009 c1 80Jazzball
that was absolutely,

run-away-train, death spiral,

madness. So frantic and stunning

that it made me read faster, and faster,

until it all crashed on the

last line. A-Oh
5/22/2009 c1 4unicornbarf
powerful. i love it.

i found the intro a bit startling at first, a bit strange, but then it sucked me in quickly before i could scream for help. well done.

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