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3/20/2022 c15 Coral
I wish that Elezay and Rai make up . Other than that great story
10/25/2019 c31 1PsychosomaticReality
This was so beautiful! I love Rainier and Kailas so much. I love Daymon and Belle and I just absolutely love love love Jazel. She wasn't around as long as everyone else but she left a lasting impression.
2/24/2019 c30 Delena fan
It's perfect I love it
2/24/2019 c25 Delena fan
Omg! I can't believe it
5/1/2018 c30 Guest
This story is definitely one of the best here on Fiction Press. I could read this over and over again. If you haven't already, get this story published. I would love a physical copy of it :)
1/10/2018 c2 Guest
;-;
7/29/2017 c3 Jivan
Simple and intresting
6/28/2017 c23 5MostlyAlexLeigh
OMFG I KNEW IT AND I HATE THEM AND OMG WHAT IS WRONG WITH THEM WHY WOULD THEY DO THAT TO HER?

Lol, betcha Kailas won't take it super well.

Wonderful story!
6/28/2017 c20 MostlyAlexLeigh
I love this story! Your writing is so good, and the characters are so interesting!

I bet Rainer's dad essentially married her off to that creep...
6/28/2017 c4 MostlyAlexLeigh
Except yes way in hell, Rai, yes way in hell!

Loving this, thanks for writing!
5/29/2017 c31 ambitiousSD
Great story. Just wooooooooooooooow .
Really creative plus super fab.
Do you know in India Kai-lash is the name of sacred mountains where one of Indian god is believed to be live .
great work.
All the best n write more stories.
3/11/2016 c6 slcjnk2008
I love this story, but Layton's giving me the creeps and he's not even real. That's how good this story is; it makes you feel what the characters are feeling. - Shelley
3/11/2016 c2 slcjnk2008
This chapter is great. But it brings up a couple of questions I'm curious about. First, why does she feel like she does towards her father and secondly, she stills does not know what the guy that is staring at her is. I hope I find out soon. - Shelley
3/11/2016 c1 slcjnk2008
Hi, This is a great beginning and has captured my attention. Looking forward to your next chapter. - Shelley
11/1/2015 c31 1somersaultkick
I love this story sooo much. I can't hate Rainier(damn I almost wrote Vinaya as her name, still stuck with His Captive xD) because she's a teenager, thus prone to stupidity :D
Sequel? You really know how to lighten someone's mood. Yeeeeyy!
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