for Checkmate11/19/2010 c2 Crescent City Chick
I'm so glad you continued this. Its so interesting. A very good story. I'm very curious to see what else is to come. I'll be impatiently waiting for the next chapter ^_^
I'm so glad you continued this. Its so interesting. A very good story. I'm very curious to see what else is to come. I'll be impatiently waiting for the next chapter ^_^
11/19/2010 c2 
11Lucid Lune in Acoustic
Aw! I'm really enjoying this budding relationship between Akira and Nadira but I sense trouble ahead in the form of the Duchess. Did you intend for their names to rhyme? I wonder what Callia(?) thinks about the story that Nadira ran away? I hope Albert has the chance to see his daughter once at least before he passes. After five years of believing that she hadn't just run away, and finding out that he was right, to then not be able to see her? Man, that would-for lack of a better word-blow. I'm really interested, so I hope there's more to come soon.
11Lucid Lune in AcousticAw! I'm really enjoying this budding relationship between Akira and Nadira but I sense trouble ahead in the form of the Duchess. Did you intend for their names to rhyme? I wonder what Callia(?) thinks about the story that Nadira ran away? I hope Albert has the chance to see his daughter once at least before he passes. After five years of believing that she hadn't just run away, and finding out that he was right, to then not be able to see her? Man, that would-for lack of a better word-blow. I'm really interested, so I hope there's more to come soon.
11/19/2010 c1 Lucid Lune in Acoustic
Akira cannot be dead and damn Marilynn, what a horrible human being she is. Albert, honestly, stop being so spineless. As for the rest of the characters, we shall see. Goodness. I hope Akira isn't actually dead.
Oh, I've been wondering, how extensively do you research before you start writing? You do research, don't you? It seems that way, all of your stories have this authenticity that I just love, which is why I'm asking.
I loved this, by the way. ^_^
*Peace.
Akira cannot be dead and damn Marilynn, what a horrible human being she is. Albert, honestly, stop being so spineless. As for the rest of the characters, we shall see. Goodness. I hope Akira isn't actually dead.
Oh, I've been wondering, how extensively do you research before you start writing? You do research, don't you? It seems that way, all of your stories have this authenticity that I just love, which is why I'm asking.
I loved this, by the way. ^_^
*Peace.
11/6/2010 c1 16mizgardenia21
Where's the rest? I got so into this story. It's wonderful. But I promised myself I wouldn't guilt an author into finishing anything. I really like it. It was really good writing.
16mizgardenia21Where's the rest? I got so into this story. It's wonderful. But I promised myself I wouldn't guilt an author into finishing anything. I really like it. It was really good writing.
3/2/2010 c1 johnandvan
Really good first chapter, Marilyn needs to die a slow death, and I love Akira what is his true history. Love the fairytale feel of the story, thanks for the chapter
Really good first chapter, Marilyn needs to die a slow death, and I love Akira what is his true history. Love the fairytale feel of the story, thanks for the chapter
10/11/2009 c1 5BlueAki
OMG! OMG! Please please continue this story. I am definitely interested in it. Please update soon.
5BlueAkiOMG! OMG! Please please continue this story. I am definitely interested in it. Please update soon.
5/22/2009 c1 D. Milray
Wow, I can always depend on you to write stories about characters that I can finally relate to. Not only can I relate, the actual plot is very strong and adventurous, unlike the ones that are just, drama drama drama she-took-my-man drama drama drama. I feel absolutely honored to be able to read your stories, and I hope that one day, I will be on your level of writing, because you are simply one of a kind. You're like the only author that I have on author alert and I read every new story you come out with, and all the chapter of your older stories because they are amazing. I wait anxiously for your updates all the time because I know that they are worth reading. Please, keep doing what you are doing and never stop.
Wow, I can always depend on you to write stories about characters that I can finally relate to. Not only can I relate, the actual plot is very strong and adventurous, unlike the ones that are just, drama drama drama she-took-my-man drama drama drama. I feel absolutely honored to be able to read your stories, and I hope that one day, I will be on your level of writing, because you are simply one of a kind. You're like the only author that I have on author alert and I read every new story you come out with, and all the chapter of your older stories because they are amazing. I wait anxiously for your updates all the time because I know that they are worth reading. Please, keep doing what you are doing and never stop.
5/22/2009 c1 Crescent City Chick
Awesome story. I really like it so far. Aww poor Akira, I was really starting to like him. :( I can't wait to read more. (Also ur other stories :D )
Awesome story. I really like it so far. Aww poor Akira, I was really starting to like him. :( I can't wait to read more. (Also ur other stories :D )