10/30/2017 c1 Guest
Dystopia societies are about control and power. however in order to completely understand the reason for dystopia society, one must first understand what is the purpose for government, and then understand the mind of the person in control of such a terrifying society.

5/8/2016 c1 Violet
Pretty good, but I'm only a freshman in high school and need some inspiration and got it here.

8/21/2015 c1 Harriet
Nice essay. How do you write with such good vocabulary and effort. I got a little bored half way through but that is cause I am lazy. I love fiction stories. I love "Geek Girl" by Holly Smale. Do you know any books like "Geek Girl".

10/16/2014 c1 Guest
gud

10/23/2013 c1 Anne Karing
Great Job!

5/25/2009 c1 1vermillion-sunsets
Hey kittyinjurface,

I was browsing through the essay section, when I found this and thought to myself, "What a coincidence! I'm writing a paper on the exact same books!" So. First things first.

It was very thoroughly researched. And by that, I mean that you read the books. So that was good.

There are a couple of really glaring mistakes that you could have caught if you'd proofread it, and it could flow better.

Otherwise, it was something I would have expected of an eighth grader. I'm not trying to be harsh, but the conclusions at the end are juvenile at best and the "analysis" could have been done by anyone idly perusing one of the books during their spare time. The conclusion is overly simplistic. Also, using two books to represent a genre is not a good way of writing an essay.

Cheers,

Vermillion Sunsets -

Ridding the world of idiocy one idiot at a time.