
6/28/2009 c5 AZN t a c o s
whoa... I never thought that Phillip was such a pervert. O.O but it was sweet of Brad to take care of Trisha! :)
whoa... I never thought that Phillip was such a pervert. O.O but it was sweet of Brad to take care of Trisha! :)
6/28/2009 c6
3Miss-You-Too
Haha, I loved it again! Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love Brads personality! He's so cute! I want more chapters dammit, more!

Haha, I loved it again! Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love Brads personality! He's so cute! I want more chapters dammit, more!
6/22/2009 c5 Miss-You-Too
Hell yeah my opinion of Philip changed! What a butt wipe! I don't want to punch him in his face, no; i want to KICK him in the face and my shoes would have cleets on the bottom! What a jerk! This was really unexpected, Iona seems so nice! At first I was being stereotypical and guessed that she would believe Philip when he said Trish pushed herself on him, but she didn't! Sheesh, it's starting to get hard to predict this story and I'm usually good at that! But thats a good thing though- maybe not for my pride in predictions but as a story. I can't wait for another awesome chapter!
Hell yeah my opinion of Philip changed! What a butt wipe! I don't want to punch him in his face, no; i want to KICK him in the face and my shoes would have cleets on the bottom! What a jerk! This was really unexpected, Iona seems so nice! At first I was being stereotypical and guessed that she would believe Philip when he said Trish pushed herself on him, but she didn't! Sheesh, it's starting to get hard to predict this story and I'm usually good at that! But thats a good thing though- maybe not for my pride in predictions but as a story. I can't wait for another awesome chapter!
6/20/2009 c4 Miss-You-Too
This chapter was great! We finally got a little more into Tia's character- which is very hilarious! I'm not sure what to think of Iona though, she seems nice so far but who knows maybe that diabolical plan Trisha thought of is true. So far I like Brad and Philips characters too. Though since I don't know anything about Matt I can't say for him. Anywho great update and I can't wait for more!
This chapter was great! We finally got a little more into Tia's character- which is very hilarious! I'm not sure what to think of Iona though, she seems nice so far but who knows maybe that diabolical plan Trisha thought of is true. So far I like Brad and Philips characters too. Though since I don't know anything about Matt I can't say for him. Anywho great update and I can't wait for more!
6/10/2009 c3 Its.Not.Me.Its.You
trish reminds me of myself alot
im akward around new people i wont make the first move
i can talk to guys just not flirt or tell when they like me
and my social skills pretty much suck
only im a year older than her
-ifly*hugs*
trish reminds me of myself alot
im akward around new people i wont make the first move
i can talk to guys just not flirt or tell when they like me
and my social skills pretty much suck
only im a year older than her
-ifly*hugs*
5/29/2009 c3
3Miss-You-Too
Haha! Great update. Trisha is quite the humorous one. It's okay if she's boy crazy- so am I. Lol, well update soon!

Haha! Great update. Trisha is quite the humorous one. It's okay if she's boy crazy- so am I. Lol, well update soon!
5/24/2009 c2 Baby perfectionist
hahaha xD nice
i know that its prob Brad but hoping its another guy 'coz im weird like that and wishing that there was some form of love triangle. gahh im rambling anywayy YAYY! thanks for updating dude! :D
awesome chapter, now dont take too long on the next one :P
hahaha xD nice
i know that its prob Brad but hoping its another guy 'coz im weird like that and wishing that there was some form of love triangle. gahh im rambling anywayy YAYY! thanks for updating dude! :D
awesome chapter, now dont take too long on the next one :P
5/24/2009 c2 SkubaLaura
It's very good so far, but you left us with a wonderful cliffhanger, so you need to update ASAP.
It's very good so far, but you left us with a wonderful cliffhanger, so you need to update ASAP.
5/24/2009 c2 Miss-You-Too
CLIFFHANGER! Wow,, this was really good, and funny too. And then she falls over and kisses him, how embarissing, right? Well update soon.
CLIFFHANGER! Wow,, this was really good, and funny too. And then she falls over and kisses him, how embarissing, right? Well update soon.
5/23/2009 c1 Baby perfectionist
LOVED IT!
LOL at "independently minded young women". Absolutely amazing chapter. Keep up the good work! I just hope you'll continue it and not stop partway!
Update soon! even if uni is killing you, I wont take that excuse :P
LOVED IT!
LOL at "independently minded young women". Absolutely amazing chapter. Keep up the good work! I just hope you'll continue it and not stop partway!
Update soon! even if uni is killing you, I wont take that excuse :P
5/23/2009 c1 AZN t a c o s
Really good for a first time writer :D You should continue this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Really good for a first time writer :D You should continue this story. I can't wait for the next chapter!