for Song Girl11/16/2009 c3 
2Pidgeon
this story is brilliant! not the best grammar of course, but its still readable. i love the storyline though.
please update again soon!
2Pidgeonthis story is brilliant! not the best grammar of course, but its still readable. i love the storyline though.
please update again soon!
10/13/2009 c3 4LaMeO1
wow i love your story
the basis is flippin awesome
i'll beta for you just pm me back and i'll send you my email...
update soon!
=D
4LaMeO1wow i love your story
the basis is flippin awesome
i'll beta for you just pm me back and i'll send you my email...
update soon!
=D
10/13/2009 c3 tickle582
i really ike it i can't wait to find out more you know that they had to fall in love can't wait to see more
update real soon
~abby~
i really ike it i can't wait to find out more you know that they had to fall in love can't wait to see more
update real soon
~abby~
10/13/2009 c3 1notthiscreative
Hm.Lol.
Yay! An update on the story! It's been a while! I iike it.
Good chapter! We get to learn some about Skys life! Poor guy. Pretty messed up brother.
I can't wait to find out more about what hapened! Why he wrote the song. Why she crys at the mention of him!
1notthiscreativeHm.Lol.
Yay! An update on the story! It's been a while! I iike it.
Good chapter! We get to learn some about Skys life! Poor guy. Pretty messed up brother.
I can't wait to find out more about what hapened! Why he wrote the song. Why she crys at the mention of him!
10/13/2009 c3 6Samm.xXx
Yay yay yay! It was slightly amazing, even if reading through it made me want to kill my eyes and shake some English into you! I will help you in your beta-lessness. I promise. Uh, yeah, that's al I got. Keep up the amazing work!
6Samm.xXxYay yay yay! It was slightly amazing, even if reading through it made me want to kill my eyes and shake some English into you! I will help you in your beta-lessness. I promise. Uh, yeah, that's al I got. Keep up the amazing work!
10/13/2009 c3 3xHopeLesSdReaMeRx
i really like the plot and the lyrics. Did you make the songs? Because i was looking for it but i couldn't find it. please update soon.
3xHopeLesSdReaMeRxi really like the plot and the lyrics. Did you make the songs? Because i was looking for it but i couldn't find it. please update soon.
8/23/2009 c2 6Samm.xXx
I love this! Im kinda slightly pissed you havent updated in a while but well, it happens but this is definitely, well i like it, i like it alot.
6Samm.xXxI love this! Im kinda slightly pissed you havent updated in a while but well, it happens but this is definitely, well i like it, i like it alot.
8/23/2009 c2 2whitecrayons
Hello
:D
I really like your plot, and the story's pretty nice, but you're punctuations and spelling are a bit off and that's somehow sort of irritating (I think it's just me, but still). If you need any help I can be your beta. :)
Anyway.
I hope you update soon! :D
2whitecrayonsHello
:D
I really like your plot, and the story's pretty nice, but you're punctuations and spelling are a bit off and that's somehow sort of irritating (I think it's just me, but still). If you need any help I can be your beta. :)
Anyway.
I hope you update soon! :D
8/15/2009 c2 4Freaky Fred
I normally hate reviewing for more than one chapter (I prefer to leave one for each), but wow. I had to keep reading straight through, it was that good.
This is a very nice, new idea that I know I'm going to like even more once the story progresses.
Did you write the song with the lyrics at the top yourself? That's so cool. (:
The only thing is I think you could benefit from puncuating more. I found lots of run-on sentences that I had to go back and read twice to understand. (But don't worry, I have this problem, too.)
Keep writing. (:
4Freaky FredI normally hate reviewing for more than one chapter (I prefer to leave one for each), but wow. I had to keep reading straight through, it was that good.
This is a very nice, new idea that I know I'm going to like even more once the story progresses.
Did you write the song with the lyrics at the top yourself? That's so cool. (:
The only thing is I think you could benefit from puncuating more. I found lots of run-on sentences that I had to go back and read twice to understand. (But don't worry, I have this problem, too.)
Keep writing. (:
8/13/2009 c2 4LaraineGlass
Amazing start.
I love the idea of the story. You made the classic "Bad Boy" story into something truly unique. I love badasses. LOL.
Looking forward to reading more. :)
4LaraineGlassAmazing start.
I love the idea of the story. You made the classic "Bad Boy" story into something truly unique. I love badasses. LOL.
Looking forward to reading more. :)
7/28/2009 c2 5CuriousContradiction
I finally put links to grammar/punctuation rules on my profile page. I think if you get the dialogue right, this story could look better than it already does. :)
5CuriousContradictionI finally put links to grammar/punctuation rules on my profile page. I think if you get the dialogue right, this story could look better than it already does. :)
7/18/2009 c2 1MintCcIceCream
AW! That was a great chapter! I really really love how you show the then and now! I can't wait to see what's realy going on instead of just lead up stuff! I really like the story so far and I can't wait for more! Good luck writing and with life and other stuff! LOVE THE STORY AND CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON!
Love,
MintCcIceCream ♥
1MintCcIceCreamAW! That was a great chapter! I really really love how you show the then and now! I can't wait to see what's realy going on instead of just lead up stuff! I really like the story so far and I can't wait for more! Good luck writing and with life and other stuff! LOVE THE STORY AND CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON!
Love,
MintCcIceCream ♥
7/17/2009 c1 guiltyofbeingwhite
omj! best story ever
i wish i was as talented as trench coats suck
maybe i should write a book
oh wait
hahaha I LAUGH AT MYSELF.
omj! best story ever
i wish i was as talented as trench coats suck
maybe i should write a book
oh wait
hahaha I LAUGH AT MYSELF.
7/16/2009 c2 3Im Just Mlssundaztood
Finally, yeah, I should be talking.
But I loved this chapter. So it's between flashbacks and present time. I was confused to why he would write her a love song if he didn't even know her.
But I really like this and the lyrics.
Do people know which Melody it is? Other than the band and Julie, that is. Or are we gonna figure out later in the story?
She seems really upset about whatever he did and/or what happened. and he's got a tattoo of her too.
The only thing I'm wondering: Sky didn't really like her much when they met. Why would she agree to go out with him knowing that? Gonna take work to put them together.
Please update soon.
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3Im Just MlssundaztoodFinally, yeah, I should be talking.
But I loved this chapter. So it's between flashbacks and present time. I was confused to why he would write her a love song if he didn't even know her.
But I really like this and the lyrics.
Do people know which Melody it is? Other than the band and Julie, that is. Or are we gonna figure out later in the story?
She seems really upset about whatever he did and/or what happened. and he's got a tattoo of her too.
The only thing I'm wondering: Sky didn't really like her much when they met. Why would she agree to go out with him knowing that? Gonna take work to put them together.
Please update soon.
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