
6/30/2011 c1 Zaina Anastacia
I bet my iPod felt exactly like this before I was attacked by a wave at the beach and it passed on... R.I.P Anastacia's iPod .
I bet my iPod felt exactly like this before I was attacked by a wave at the beach and it passed on... R.I.P Anastacia's iPod .
6/9/2009 c1
20lifeisawesome
Ah! Cute! That's funny. I think my phone feels the same way. But you haven't broke yet, Sammy!
...Yeah, I named her.

Ah! Cute! That's funny. I think my phone feels the same way. But you haven't broke yet, Sammy!
...Yeah, I named her.
5/24/2009 c1
25three.word.lies
i don't understand why "you" is capitalized. i think it would've looked aesthetically better without the added theatrics -bolding, capitalizing, hyphenating. i understand that you want to emphasize the aspect of "you" in the beginning and "i" in the end, but i think it would be better without saying/showing it. your only job is to write the poem and us, the readers, to interpret how we may. you don't have to prove anything to us.
regardless, i absolutely adore this idea. simply ingenious. i'm completely jealous with every corner of my heart. i want to steal it and copyright it. fucking love the ending.

i don't understand why "you" is capitalized. i think it would've looked aesthetically better without the added theatrics -bolding, capitalizing, hyphenating. i understand that you want to emphasize the aspect of "you" in the beginning and "i" in the end, but i think it would be better without saying/showing it. your only job is to write the poem and us, the readers, to interpret how we may. you don't have to prove anything to us.
regardless, i absolutely adore this idea. simply ingenious. i'm completely jealous with every corner of my heart. i want to steal it and copyright it. fucking love the ending.