8/21/2009 c2 3Sketchy Nava
Interesting ... odd, but very interesting. Love the wannabe gangsters trying to get into Key's pants. Hilarious. And unfortunately very realistic sounding.
The Christian and Key thing is still a bit odd and confusing for me and I don't really understand it right now ... but as it progresses I hope that I do.
Interesting ... odd, but very interesting. Love the wannabe gangsters trying to get into Key's pants. Hilarious. And unfortunately very realistic sounding.
The Christian and Key thing is still a bit odd and confusing for me and I don't really understand it right now ... but as it progresses I hope that I do.
8/21/2009 c2 Ivix
I think your story is cool, your main character is good too...she is not stupid, strange or annoying(i get a lot of that in some stories).. I'm just curious about this Christian guy.. I don't know almost nothing about him.. and I don't even know how to imagine him. =)
I'm waiting for more updates... good job =p
I think your story is cool, your main character is good too...she is not stupid, strange or annoying(i get a lot of that in some stories).. I'm just curious about this Christian guy.. I don't know almost nothing about him.. and I don't even know how to imagine him. =)
I'm waiting for more updates... good job =p