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6/11/2014 c5 Anonymous
You really need to update this story - fast! I like your writing style and think your an amazing writer.
6/9/2010 c5 7smurf-love
wow i cant beleive that you havent put another chapter up in almost a year, this is really good and i would like to read ore of it...i ope you continue to write this story its very good
12/21/2009 c5 2Melbel267
This story is amazing. Post more soon pleaasse!

-Mel :)
7/1/2009 c5 3SnowsxBitterxHeart
Sorry that it took so long to review, huh. -'

But anyways I loved this chapter! Thom was such a real character and it's sad that he dies. I real love how you end this chapter too. It absolutely fits a dragon story to the T. You left me excited and impatient (in a good way) for the next chapter. So pretty please update as soon as you can, please? That would be awesome! Great job and keep writing!


P.S. This just gets better and better the more I read it, haha! ^^
6/27/2009 c5 9Lerene
Oh no, Thom!
6/23/2009 c5 9Narq
Wow, this is such a wonderful chapter. You potrtayed Thom beautifully - at times I didn't know whether to like him or not to... but then, in the end he was a talented, nice, but flawed and very real charcter. You must admit, that's the best you can get to!

I like your style. Clear - not flowery at all, with only a few details at the really essential parts.

Great work! I LOVE this!

6/23/2009 c5 5aferdeity
well that was depressing. not what I expected. Well... I still want to read more so please update soon.
6/23/2009 c5 Evangeline Curls
wow...very scary and sad ending! update again soon
6/23/2009 c5 3GirlWithTheDancingCherryTrees
KICK ASS. loved the ending sentence too ^_^
6/18/2009 c4 9Lerene
That chapter just has me dieing to read the next chapter.
6/15/2009 c4 5aferdeity
this is a really good story. I like your writing style. it is full of description. I cannot wait to read more, and hope you update soon!
6/14/2009 c4 4notjustink
This story sounds pretty good. I cannot wait to see what the dragon does. Keep writing!
6/14/2009 c4 9Narq
Oh my god, you are SO EVIL, I was on the edge of my seat, holding my breath and you.. you. .. you just broke it off! ERGH! So annoying!

One thing I found confusing was that this king felt suddenly compassionate when I came to this: "Keshan stood abruptly and powerfully as he gazed down at the girl, his marred forehead smoothed out into happiness as he realised that the solution to the problem, lay right before his very eyes. And the girl didn't even know it! The poor thing, she had been probably frightened out of her wits when she had been forced in here. Thinking that he would have thrown her to the bed and robbed her of the very thing that Gamir said a Dragon would require." I'm not sure if the feeling I felt was on purpse or not.


6/13/2009 c4 3SnowsxBitterxHeart
Oh, that's no fair. You ended it to soon. I can't wait for chapter 5 so update really soon please.

Not bad. ^^
6/13/2009 c4 Evangeline Curls
wow great chapter! Really dramatic! I can't wait to read the next chapter. update again soon please :)
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