for Crazy5/30/2009 c1 
151ForeverBehindTheImpression
Yes! You have lost it! The format thing of this was awesome! Great thoughts behind the everything. Really liked it :D
151ForeverBehindTheImpressionYes! You have lost it! The format thing of this was awesome! Great thoughts behind the everything. Really liked it :D
5/28/2009 c1 19The Beautiful Letdown
Please be ok, Brie! I'm sobbing right now and I don't know what I'm gonna do if I loose you!
19The Beautiful LetdownPlease be ok, Brie! I'm sobbing right now and I don't know what I'm gonna do if I loose you!
5/28/2009 c1 12Avio Favalon
Wow. That was amazing. I LOVE the font effects and kudos to you for not being too lazy to go through and put them in. XD but yes, i liked it oodles. :D
12Avio FavalonWow. That was amazing. I LOVE the font effects and kudos to you for not being too lazy to go through and put them in. XD but yes, i liked it oodles. :D
5/28/2009 c1 166listen to what i've never said
i have this feeling more often than most people. You did an excellent job of getting it down on paper (screen? XD) and I love this :) Bravo!
166listen to what i've never saidi have this feeling more often than most people. You did an excellent job of getting it down on paper (screen? XD) and I love this :) Bravo!
5/28/2009 c1 16maple the wacky tree
whoa. i love poems like these. the formatting is so (dare i say it?) CRAZY good. mehehe. it's almost as cool just to look at it as it is to read it.
the only thing that kinda stood out to me (and this is kinda nitpicky, so you can ignore it if you want) is how you used "clawing" at the beginning so strongly and then you used it again in the line "and clawing at my heart." i don't know. the word choice just seemed redundent, and it bugged me a little. unless of course you did that on purpose. then you might want to repeat some of the other words at the beginning too to make the repeat of "clawing" look less acidental.
Does that make any sense? o.0 Once again, loved it! We all hit those points of insanity at some point in our lives. ;)
16maple the wacky treewhoa. i love poems like these. the formatting is so (dare i say it?) CRAZY good. mehehe. it's almost as cool just to look at it as it is to read it.
the only thing that kinda stood out to me (and this is kinda nitpicky, so you can ignore it if you want) is how you used "clawing" at the beginning so strongly and then you used it again in the line "and clawing at my heart." i don't know. the word choice just seemed redundent, and it bugged me a little. unless of course you did that on purpose. then you might want to repeat some of the other words at the beginning too to make the repeat of "clawing" look less acidental.
Does that make any sense? o.0 Once again, loved it! We all hit those points of insanity at some point in our lives. ;)