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9MagicWords
Funny, I just came across another one of your works!
I liked the first part of the last line a lot. The writing is vivid but again, just needs some grammer check. No biggie though. It's great.
9MagicWordsFunny, I just came across another one of your works!
I liked the first part of the last line a lot. The writing is vivid but again, just needs some grammer check. No biggie though. It's great.