for How Long Have You Been Writing?6/8/2009 c1 
5Said Author
I’m not the best writing.
^Add "at" after "best". :P
I actually thought this was good. Keep it up!
5Said AuthorI’m not the best writing.
^Add "at" after "best". :P
I actually thought this was good. Keep it up!
6/6/2009 c1 smileyfox148
AW! ALLY YOU ROCK! SHOUT OUT TO EVERYONE WHO READS THIS; AH! Also, read some of my stories, cause we all know lifeisawesome's already uber-popular and amazing! Love ya, girly!
AW! ALLY YOU ROCK! SHOUT OUT TO EVERYONE WHO READS THIS; AH! Also, read some of my stories, cause we all know lifeisawesome's already uber-popular and amazing! Love ya, girly!
5/28/2009 c1 145young and the reckless
ha, the repetition was quite catchy.
and i'm young to this too :)
but this was cute and refreshing,
nice job.
145young and the recklessha, the repetition was quite catchy.
and i'm young to this too :)
but this was cute and refreshing,
nice job.
5/28/2009 c1 42dreamoflove
thats was so cute i loved it! i am so honored!
you are doing GREAT
keep writing is all i can say
the more emotion the stronger the poem is what i think
put all your soul into it and you will succeed!
42dreamoflovethats was so cute i loved it! i am so honored!
you are doing GREAT
keep writing is all i can say
the more emotion the stronger the poem is what i think
put all your soul into it and you will succeed!
5/28/2009 c1 12MoralHedonist
Every start is a good start. If you want criticism, you should watch your syllable count per line, it really determines the flow. If you want support, I think anyone who gets their work out there is on their way to being very good. Keep it up, and I hope to be seeing full stories soon.
12MoralHedonistEvery start is a good start. If you want criticism, you should watch your syllable count per line, it really determines the flow. If you want support, I think anyone who gets their work out there is on their way to being very good. Keep it up, and I hope to be seeing full stories soon.