for Blood of the Wolf6/4/2014 c1 Guest
please finish both of ur stories.
please finish both of ur stories.
1/3/2014 c13 
2OnyxBuddha
I really did enjoy this book while it lasted :'( . I understand what you're saying about not being able to publish anymore. This story really is good and so is its plot. Unfortunately I cannot pay for ebooks due to certain circumstances. Good Luck ! :)
2OnyxBuddhaI really did enjoy this book while it lasted :'( . I understand what you're saying about not being able to publish anymore. This story really is good and so is its plot. Unfortunately I cannot pay for ebooks due to certain circumstances. Good Luck ! :)
10/12/2013 c13 Guest
Honestly, I think this is a pretty shitty way to get readers to buy your stories! I don't like being duped into reading something the writer has no intention of posting till the end. And because of this, I have absolutely no intention of purchasing your work(s) or even attempting to read any future postings. You really do lose more followers than you gain by doing this.
Honestly, I think this is a pretty shitty way to get readers to buy your stories! I don't like being duped into reading something the writer has no intention of posting till the end. And because of this, I have absolutely no intention of purchasing your work(s) or even attempting to read any future postings. You really do lose more followers than you gain by doing this.
9/19/2013 c13 Guest
I really like your story
I really like your story
9/12/2013 c13 LuminousLoves
Hmmm...So complete is really not complete. I think when someone sees complete on FictionPress, they expect to be able to read the complete story here. I would be much more likely to support your creative endeavors if I had read the entire story here and wanted to follow your work with the next story and the next. This is a bait and switch, unfortunately. Great story, but I won't be buying. Sorry.
Hmmm...So complete is really not complete. I think when someone sees complete on FictionPress, they expect to be able to read the complete story here. I would be much more likely to support your creative endeavors if I had read the entire story here and wanted to follow your work with the next story and the next. This is a bait and switch, unfortunately. Great story, but I won't be buying. Sorry.
8/15/2013 c13 4AkeraWriterOfTheNight
Aaaaawwwww! I like thjs story! I would buy from you but your sight is down. :/
4AkeraWriterOfTheNightAaaaawwwww! I like thjs story! I would buy from you but your sight is down. :/
5/18/2013 c12 9AKhwab
Hi! I have to post my thoughts here because I can't post it at chapter 12. Anyway, I bought both your books. I'm sorry to say that after finishing both of them, I felt as if I hadn't gotten my money's worth, especially for the book which told the story of Maddy. That was more bad than Blood of the wolf. I preferred whatever was posted her instead of the remaining parts that were included in the book. I hate to say this but I'm disappointed :(
9AKhwabHi! I have to post my thoughts here because I can't post it at chapter 12. Anyway, I bought both your books. I'm sorry to say that after finishing both of them, I felt as if I hadn't gotten my money's worth, especially for the book which told the story of Maddy. That was more bad than Blood of the wolf. I preferred whatever was posted her instead of the remaining parts that were included in the book. I hate to say this but I'm disappointed :(
3/3/2013 c13 Thebeanster171
Ohhhhhh! Please don't stop here! More!
I love this story zoo much. I read it all in one day!
I kinda have no life...
Ohhhhhh! Please don't stop here! More!
I love this story zoo much. I read it all in one day!
I kinda have no life...
2/24/2013 c13 AKhwab
I have thoroughly enjoyed whatever I have read so far. I have never bought an ebook before & I have no idea how to do but when I do, I'll remember to buy this :)
I have thoroughly enjoyed whatever I have read so far. I have never bought an ebook before & I have no idea how to do but when I do, I'll remember to buy this :)
2/24/2013 c8 AKhwab
That was TOO hot - heat under the skin hot. I like Jamie. Sirus? Not so much but I can guess he is hawt.
That was TOO hot - heat under the skin hot. I like Jamie. Sirus? Not so much but I can guess he is hawt.
2/23/2013 c1 AKhwab
A SUPERB start but I think she's a little too young for that guy. He seems a little TOO old and cold. I've got a complaint with the part where she lands on the motorcycle. You said she plunked on the back of the motorcycle yet, she could feel his chest at her back. Please explain that.
A SUPERB start but I think she's a little too young for that guy. He seems a little TOO old and cold. I've got a complaint with the part where she lands on the motorcycle. You said she plunked on the back of the motorcycle yet, she could feel his chest at her back. Please explain that.
2/16/2013 c13 19Alaeryel
I loved this story and would love to read the rest if there is more. I don't have an ereader or anything and I know you can get the books cheap but it isn't feasible for me at this time even to get in written form Winter. Between trying to raise two young boys on my own, being laid off and undergoing treatment-my money is really tight BUT I THING YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND THIS STORY IS WELL BEYOND THE PERFECTION FOR PUBLICATION-CONGRATULATIONS!
19AlaeryelI loved this story and would love to read the rest if there is more. I don't have an ereader or anything and I know you can get the books cheap but it isn't feasible for me at this time even to get in written form Winter. Between trying to raise two young boys on my own, being laid off and undergoing treatment-my money is really tight BUT I THING YOU ARE AN AMAZING AUTHOR AND THIS STORY IS WELL BEYOND THE PERFECTION FOR PUBLICATION-CONGRATULATIONS!
2/16/2013 c12 Alaeryel
OH MY GOODNESS! Winter the last two chapters WERE UNBELIEVABLE! I HAVE FALLEN HOOK LINE AND SINKER FOR THIS STORY and my heart is BREAKING for everything Jaime has had to endure and ready to KICK Syrus' ass FOR PUTTING HER THRU ALL OF THIS!
OH MY GOODNESS! Winter the last two chapters WERE UNBELIEVABLE! I HAVE FALLEN HOOK LINE AND SINKER FOR THIS STORY and my heart is BREAKING for everything Jaime has had to endure and ready to KICK Syrus' ass FOR PUTTING HER THRU ALL OF THIS!