
5/30/2009 c1 ann
I m so glad you are writing another story, i loved your other one.
i like the start of this story, but please tell me you will age her to like 20 yrs or something for the rest of the story.
Also could you pretty please not make the guy too older then her.
Do update soon
=)
I m so glad you are writing another story, i loved your other one.
i like the start of this story, but please tell me you will age her to like 20 yrs or something for the rest of the story.
Also could you pretty please not make the guy too older then her.
Do update soon
=)
5/30/2009 c1 xcrazyladyo
WOW! Great first chapter. Definately left me wanting more. It wasn't long enough by any means. I look forward to reading more of your work.
WOW! Great first chapter. Definately left me wanting more. It wasn't long enough by any means. I look forward to reading more of your work.
5/30/2009 c1 blackrule
It seems too short! A cliff hanger if you will. Looks excellent though. Can't wait to read more :)
It seems too short! A cliff hanger if you will. Looks excellent though. Can't wait to read more :)
5/30/2009 c1
9Jennyt82
Amazing! Love it already. Wow, i don't know what to say other than i have nothing but words of praise for you. Update really, really, really, really soon ok.

Amazing! Love it already. Wow, i don't know what to say other than i have nothing but words of praise for you. Update really, really, really, really soon ok.
5/30/2009 c1 Jeremiah
Great work, good writing, can't wait to see what happens!
Great work, good writing, can't wait to see what happens!