for Blood of the Wolf2/18/2012 c3 Meh
This is amazing. It's worth more than four hundred reviews.
The action is spot on and the werewolf mate thing is not over dramatic with the love at first bullshit. Seems real in a way :$
~ non.graceful
This is amazing. It's worth more than four hundred reviews.
The action is spot on and the werewolf mate thing is not over dramatic with the love at first bullshit. Seems real in a way :$
~ non.graceful
2/18/2012 c1 Meh
Some mistakes only in the first three paragraphs but nothing major.
Is it sick that I actually like that her pack died and that this guy wants her now? Yes, I probably am a really sick person- I caught the flu this morning, in summer :/
Anywho! I look forward to the violence and blood and what not!
~ non.graceful
Some mistakes only in the first three paragraphs but nothing major.
Is it sick that I actually like that her pack died and that this guy wants her now? Yes, I probably am a really sick person- I caught the flu this morning, in summer :/
Anywho! I look forward to the violence and blood and what not!
~ non.graceful
2/15/2012 c13 Rosey-Blue
Was she wearing a skirt or pants? coz he cant do this-"His hands slid up her skirt, leaving trails of fire against her" and this-"He slid his hand down the waist of her pants" unless she's wearing both...
Was she wearing a skirt or pants? coz he cant do this-"His hands slid up her skirt, leaving trails of fire against her" and this-"He slid his hand down the waist of her pants" unless she's wearing both...
2/15/2012 c13 Yami
Hello! this is such a great story, it's absolutely addictive. I was up until 4 am reading it!
However, there are a few things that bother me. The first one is that you use the word cunt, which I find to be a very vile and derogatory word toward women, but if it's just your writing style, or the way you feel the story should go, then continue using it, I'm just letting you know that it disturbs me. The second is that this story is marked "complete" so I started reading it thinking that it was done only to find out that it is only a preview, I'm getting the book, but it would be nice if you could put in the discription that this is a preview for a book you can purchase. That's all!
This really is a great story and the plot and characters are very fun to read about. Great work!
Hello! this is such a great story, it's absolutely addictive. I was up until 4 am reading it!
However, there are a few things that bother me. The first one is that you use the word cunt, which I find to be a very vile and derogatory word toward women, but if it's just your writing style, or the way you feel the story should go, then continue using it, I'm just letting you know that it disturbs me. The second is that this story is marked "complete" so I started reading it thinking that it was done only to find out that it is only a preview, I'm getting the book, but it would be nice if you could put in the discription that this is a preview for a book you can purchase. That's all!
This really is a great story and the plot and characters are very fun to read about. Great work!
2/14/2012 c13 Azerjaban
Didn't remember this story until about halfway through and it hit me (took awhile to get through the fluff) not that I'm complaining... Just one tiny thing bothered me:
"His fingers found her wet hole"
Bad, bad visualization. Really snapped me out of the scene you created and made me go "...ew". Maybe somthing like:
"His fingers found her wet centre" is even better
Thnx for thr read
Didn't remember this story until about halfway through and it hit me (took awhile to get through the fluff) not that I'm complaining... Just one tiny thing bothered me:
"His fingers found her wet hole"
Bad, bad visualization. Really snapped me out of the scene you created and made me go "...ew". Maybe somthing like:
"His fingers found her wet centre" is even better
Thnx for thr read
2/14/2012 c13 Azerjaban
Didn't remember this story until about halfway through and it hit me (took awhile to get through the fluff) not that I'm complaining... Just one tiny thing bothered me:
"His fingers found her wet hole"
Bad, bad visualizatio.
Didn't remember this story until about halfway through and it hit me (took awhile to get through the fluff) not that I'm complaining... Just one tiny thing bothered me:
"His fingers found her wet hole"
Bad, bad visualizatio.
2/14/2012 c13 
3StaNdUPtomE
So I was good, I went to e books, purchased it, and now I have a question, last time I purchased something from ebooks I got an email that said here it is YAY! ... that didnt happen this time, but my order is 'complete' maybe its just not as instantaneous or maybe since its newly published it takes longer... but I was curious if you knew the answer... :D Thank you love your story
3StaNdUPtomESo I was good, I went to e books, purchased it, and now I have a question, last time I purchased something from ebooks I got an email that said here it is YAY! ... that didnt happen this time, but my order is 'complete' maybe its just not as instantaneous or maybe since its newly published it takes longer... but I was curious if you knew the answer... :D Thank you love your story
10/22/2011 c12 Mitsukai Megumi
Wow, nice fic. Too bad it's been a long time since you updated.
I love the fact that you didn't rush their relationship. Some people just made their characters fall in love with each other three seconds after they met, have sex, and then live happily ever after. It sucks...
So, update, will ya? This one is good!
Wow, nice fic. Too bad it's been a long time since you updated.
I love the fact that you didn't rush their relationship. Some people just made their characters fall in love with each other three seconds after they met, have sex, and then live happily ever after. It sucks...
So, update, will ya? This one is good!
10/19/2011 c12 8DorkExpress
Is she going to submitt to him? Because let me tell you, the sexual tention is killing me.
XOXO
8DorkExpressIs she going to submitt to him? Because let me tell you, the sexual tention is killing me.
XOXO
6/17/2011 c12 11Jessiquie
Hey, so someone recommended your story and I read it on your website a week ago, and keep checking back to see if you've updated yet. Are you still writing this story? Because its kind of brilliant, theres just something about it. I like the Sirius is so brutal and unforgiving, and that Jaime is willing to fight for what she believes in. Something that i think other stories within this genre as a whole usually struggle with and lack.
So please update! I so want to see how they destroy the Magnus alfa!
11JessiquieHey, so someone recommended your story and I read it on your website a week ago, and keep checking back to see if you've updated yet. Are you still writing this story? Because its kind of brilliant, theres just something about it. I like the Sirius is so brutal and unforgiving, and that Jaime is willing to fight for what she believes in. Something that i think other stories within this genre as a whole usually struggle with and lack.
So please update! I so want to see how they destroy the Magnus alfa!
6/12/2011 c12 Guest
Please write more!
Man, why do all of these stories just end before the good parts?
Oh well.
Anyway... PLEASE WRITE MORE, I really enjoyed it!
xx :)
Please write more!
Man, why do all of these stories just end before the good parts?
Oh well.
Anyway... PLEASE WRITE MORE, I really enjoyed it!
xx :)
4/18/2011 c12 cool.story.bro
honestly if you dont continue this story soon I will kill you this story is really good
honestly if you dont continue this story soon I will kill you this story is really good